Phân tích đề" The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing"IELTS WRITING

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Bên cạnh hướng dẫn kĩ đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 2 về Relocating Business to Regional Areas (kèm bài sửa của học sinh đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ Phân tích đề" The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing"IELTS WRITING

I. Đề bài

The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic Family IELTS

III. Phân tích


  • Phân bố bố cục dạng 2 questions như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: What are the reasons?
      • Main idea 1: People these days tend to have heavier workloads and more hectic schedules than in the past     >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "convenient" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Sitting down to share a meal with their family members might not be a convenient choice. Instead, individuals usually eat out with their friends, colleagues or business partners near their workplace which can be more suitable for their timetable (HOẶC: The world of employment takes most of the time in a day of adults, and for adolescents, it is studying activities that they invest their time in the most)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "Adolescence" tiếng anh
        • Example:  In single-parent households or families with working mothers, it can be almost impossible to arrange regular times for meals when all the family is together.
      • Main idea 2: The fast food culture of modern life can change people’s eating habits 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: Is this a positive or negative trend? —> nếu theo hướng NEGATIVE có thể bố cục như sau: 
      • Main idea 1:  The close-knit family is disappearing (hoặc lead to a weaker family bond)
        • Supporting idea: Family mealtimes are a time to share news, give guidance and to make plans together >> If a family continuously eats separately, family members may not be able to share their thoughts, feelings with each other, and therefore may feel isolated from each other >> This might result in more potential misunderstanding and domestic conflicts.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "range" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: family members’ health can be negatively impacted 
        • Supporting idea: family meals wholesome home-made food were an opportunity to provide all the family members with a healthier diet 
        • Example: Without this routine, individuals especially children are sometimes left to have snacks, or eat junk food at fast-food chains. Health consequences such as obesity and hyperactivity often result when youngsters fail to eat a balanced diet  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh

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