Phân tích"Some people feel that there is too much emphasis on getting an education, and that government should spend money on leisure time activities for young people too. To what extent do you agree or disagree."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people feel that there is too much emphasis on getting an education, and that government should spend money on leisure time activities for young people too. To what extent do you agree or disagree" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people feel that there is too much emphasis on getting an education, and that government should spend money on leisure time activities for young people too. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Such activities benefit students academically & mentally.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Extracurricular activities in the arts teach students analytical skills and creative problem solving skills since they have to think creatively to successfully perform music, act in a play, or produce a work of art >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "perform"
      • Example: 
        • Activities such as athletics, music, theater, and organizations teach students how to discipline themselves through drills, practices, or rehearsals.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: life is stressful, and free time activities act as stress busters.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They break the monotony of hectic day-to-day life.
        • They build community spirit among people as during free time people meet each other and socialize >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT "ONE ANOTHER" & "EACH OTHER" 
      • Example: In Japan, there is a growing trend of people taking "forest bathing" breaks to relieve stress. Forest bathing is the practice of spending time in nature, specifically forests, to improve physical and mental health.

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