Phân tích"Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 27/7/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2. (Đề thi 27/7/2022)

Some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spent to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Đề thi 27/7/2022)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Human activities negatively affect wildlife
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The natural habitat of these animals and birds are intruded very frequently nowadays for poaching, exploitation of wild resources and for illegal encroachments.
        • The world is advancing faster than ever before, and this naturally has a huge impact on the environment >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ 
      • Example: The Amur leopard, native to Russia and China, faces habitat loss and poaching due to logging, development, and illegal hunting, leading to a dwindling population of around 84 adults, disrupting ecosystems and biodiversity. Conservation efforts, such as establishing protected areas, anti-poaching patrols, and community outreach, offer hope for the future of these magnificent cats and emphasize the importance of preserving wildlife and habitats for generations to come.

        
        

         
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: resources spent on wildlife protection are still limited.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It is widely believed that wild animal and bird conservation is only of minor importance, and human welfare is far more of a priority >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
        • This is why governments are not willing to allocate a large number of funds and resources to the conservation of wild animals, which makes it difficult for organisations that are actually trying to make a difference.
      • Example: in Vietnam, we do not see any long-lasting bird conservation campaigns due to a lack of funding from the government, and it is non-governmental organizations that currently raise the funds to take care of existing wild birds >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "existing"

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