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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 25/12/2022)
I. Đề bài
Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same as as adults who commit crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: If these juvenile delinquents were easily pardoned in place of receiving strict punishments as adults, they would not become fully aware of the serious consequences of their crimes.
- Supporting idea:
- Imposing appropriate punishments could prevent them from conducting illegal actions in the future. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "prevent" tiếng anh
- By contrast, more young criminals would emerge if they are pardoned for their wrongdoings due to their age.
- Some retributions are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: If these juvenile delinquents were easily pardoned in place of receiving strict punishments as adults, they would not become fully aware of the serious consequences of their crimes.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Young perpetrators usually receive lighter sentences than they deserve, which is an injustice to the victims. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: giving young offenders lighter sentences is unjust for the victims and their families)
- Supporting idea:
- Example: In Vietnam, there was a well-known case in which a teenager murdered almost every member of a family deliberately, and he escaped the death sentence due to being a few months under the responsible age. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "teenager" tiếng anh
- Main idea: Young perpetrators usually receive lighter sentences than they deserve, which is an injustice to the victims. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: giving young offenders lighter sentences is unjust for the victims and their families)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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