Phân tích "Some businesses find that new employees finishing their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? And how to solve this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) Some students work while studying. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion? NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some businesses find that new employees finishing their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? And how to solve this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some businesses find that new employees finishing their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? And how to solve this problem?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: this is due to the fact that many people, especially those who live in college are too focused on studying and do not pay enough attention to the importance of these skills. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: A lack of proper training during time at university could be another cause)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Because they do not understand how crucial these skills are, and in their work lives, they do not bother to acquire them. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Many fresh graduates as a result are unable to collaborate effectively with their co-workers once entering the workforce despite having extensive expertise)
        • Tertiary education nowadays seems to place more emphasis on training students to excel in their major through theoretical subjects rather than equipping them with fundamental soft skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "MAJOR" TIẾNG ANH 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: the environment in colleges places little emphasis on developing extracurricular activities for students. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "developing" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There are very few organizations for students to participate in and build up on their teamwork abilities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng & ideas topic "teamwork" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: schools should have more clubs and events for students to take part in so they have the chance to expand their network. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The grading criteria currently applied at university need to be changed to incorporate more soft skill training)
      • Supporting idea: By this way, students can foster and strengthen their interpersonal skills.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: students should be encouraged to find internships during the summer or other vacations. 
      • Supporting idea: This will help them understand the reality of work life and thus, know where to improve themselves to work effectively. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 

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