Phân tích "Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ''Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: commercials aimed at children can have a detrimental impact, particularly on the relationship between parents and their children. 
        • Supporting idea: Many children are easily manipulated to want things they see in advertisements, and this may cause conflicts between parents and children if parents deny their children of something they want. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "parents" tiếng anh 
        • Example: For example, film heroes or favourite cartoon characters are often used in such attractive advertisements that children are lured and pester their parents to buy products advertised at any cost >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "product" tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: advertising targeted at children can have negative effects on their health (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Fast food advertising has been known to be implicated in many health problems among children) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "negative" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
          • As many fast food and junk food companies these days direct their marketing strategies towards children, making their products appear to be healthy and appealing. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: advertisements for fast foods and high sugar drinks might never reveal a fact that those products causes child obesity HOẶC: Food corporations promote their products using glamorous images of perfectly cooked meat, or alluring soda cans consumed by jubilant-looking and perfectly fit child actors.)
          • Inexperienced children do not know about the harms of their health when consuming those products >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH 
        • Example: 

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