Phân tích "Fewer students choose difficult science subjects (such as mathematics and philosophy) in university in many countries. Some say more government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects for the country to develop and progress. Others believe these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Fewer students choose difficult science subjects (such as mathematics and philosophy) in university in many countries. Some say more government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects for the country to develop and progress. Others believe these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Fewer students choose difficult science subjects (such as mathematics and philosophy) in university in many countries. Some say more government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects for the country to develop and progress. Others believe these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some say more government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects for the country to develop and progress.
    • Main idea 1: Science and technology are critical drivers of economic development and innovation. 
      • Supporting idea: Investing in teaching science can help a country remain competitive in a rapidly changing global economy.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Example: South Korea's substantial investment in science education has made it a global leader in science and technology, propelling its competitiveness and prosperity.
    • Main idea 2: Promoting STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) education can address skills gaps in the job market, ensuring a well-trained workforce for emerging industries.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Emerging industries, such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, renewable energy, and cybersecurity, heavily rely on STEM skills. 
        • These industries are growing rapidly and have a consistently high demand for STEM-educated professionals.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Not everyone has an aptitude or interest in difficult science subjects. 
      • Supporting idea: Forcing students to study them can lead to disengagement, lower academic performance, and dissatisfaction.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: A study by the University of California, Berkeley found that students who were forced to take advanced science courses that they were not interested in were more likely to drop out of school. The study also found that these students were more likely to have lower grades and lower test scores.
    • Main idea 2: A broad education with exposure to various subjects is essential for well-rounded individuals. 
      • Supporting idea: Allowing students to choose their areas of study can lead to more motivated and passionate learners in other fields.
      • Example: Choosing to take a physics course out of curiosity transformed my perspective. It not only deepened my understanding of the world but also honed critical thinking and problem-solving skills, making me a more well-rounded learner, and motivating me to explore other subjects with a scientific lens.

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