Phân tích "Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 14/2/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 14/2/2023)

Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Employees who take regular breaks and vacations tend to be more productive when they return to work. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The break helps them to recharge and come back with renewed energy and focus.
        • A long break can help reduce stress levels, which can have a positive impact on mental and physical health and can lead to a healthier, happier workforce.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Offering a generous vacation package can be an attractive benefit for potential employees, and can help to retain existing staff. 
      • Supporting idea: This can save employers money in the long run, as recruitment and training costs can be significant.
      • Example: For example, if an employee at Company A feels overworked and stressed due to a lack of time off, they may begin to search for other job opportunities. In contrast, an employee at Company B with the same workload may be more content and satisfied with their job because they have more time to rest and recharge.

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