🔥Giải đề"Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe that there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What are the other factors? Do you think there is a factor that is more important than the others?"IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 6.0) - Đề thi 6/1/2024 + 25/5/2025 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích vocab

Bên cạnh giải đáp Vì sao IELTS Writing Học Mãi vẫn 5.0?, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe that there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What are the other factors? Do you think there is a factor that is more important than the others?"IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 6.0)

Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe that there are other factors that should be considered when measuring the success of a country. What are the other factors? Do you think there is a factor that is more important than the others?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Với dạng 2 question này phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success?
    • Main idea 1: When measuring a country's success, education is undoubtedly a critical factor
      • Supporting idea: A good education system is vital for the development of any nation >> Schools, colleges and universities bear the responsibility for the quality of future generations of workers I  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ Vựng Topic Education / WORK IELTS 
      • Example: South Korea's remarkable investment in education, including high school and college attendance, has transformed it from a post-war, underdeveloped nation into a highly educated, developed country with a robust economy, skilled workforce, and global industry leadership.

    • Main idea 2: The quality and accessibility of healthcare services, life expectancy, and overall well-being indicators are vital to evaluate the overall health of a population.
      • Supporting idea: Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard of living within a country >> This can be measured by looking at average life expectancy rates or availability of medical services   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Health / Health care / Medicine IELTS
      • Example: Cuba stands as an example of a country with a relatively low GDP per capita but a high standard of living, thanks to its universal healthcare system, which offers free healthcare to all citizens and contributes to a remarkable life expectancy rate of 80.1 years.

  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Do you think one factor is more important than others?
    • Main idea: a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its success and level of development.
      • Supporting idea: Education has a considerable effect on the other two factors mentioned above. 
        • It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest levels before they can carry out medical research.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh
        • It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to trade with other countries, and increased wealth.
      • Example: Singapore's world-class education system, characterized by academic excellence and high literacy rates, has contributed to its exceptional health, economic prosperity, and a life expectancy of 84.8 years, underscoring the pivotal role of education in fostering economic growth and enhancing overall well-being.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Economic development is often regarded as the most telling indicator (telling indicator – dấu hiệu rõ ràng, thể hiện rõ ràng – clear sign, revealing sign, strong signal) of national success. However, I firmly believe that various other critical dimensions (critical dimensions – khía cạnh quan trọng – essential aspects, vital elements, key components) must be considered to provide a more well-rounded evaluation (well-rounded evaluation – đánh giá toàn diện – holistic assessment, balanced judgment, comprehensive review).

Beyond GDP, educational attainment (educational attainment – trình độ giáo dục đạt được – academic achievement, scholarly success, learning level) is a cornerstone (cornerstone – nền tảng – foundation, basis, underpinning) of a nation’s prosperity. A country’s ability to provide equitable access (equitable access – sự tiếp cận công bằng – fair access, equal opportunity, unbiased provision) to quality education directly influences its workforce's skills and productivity. For instance, South Korea's unparalleled investment in education has transformed it from a war-torn state into a technological powerhouse with a globally competitive (globally competitive – có tính cạnh tranh toàn cầu – internationally strong, world-class, globally capable) economy. Furthermore, the availability and quality of public healthcare infrastructure (public healthcare infrastructure – cơ sở hạ tầng y tế công cộng – national medical system, public health network, healthcare services) are also essential. Countries like Cuba, despite their modest economic status, boast impressive life expectancy thanks to universal healthcare (universal healthcare – chăm sóc sức khỏe toàn dân – free medical service, inclusive healthcare, public health access), demonstrating that well-being extends beyond mere income levels.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Among all indicators, I contend that education plays the most pivotal role (pivotal role – vai trò then chốt – central function, crucial role, critical contribution) in shaping national success. Education lays the foundation for economic and health improvements by nurturing skilled professionals, from doctors to scientists and business leaders. Take Singapore, for example. Its world-class education system has propelled not only economic growth but also public health and longevity, with a life expectancy nearing 85 years. This shows that other achievements are inextricably linked (inextricably linked – gắn bó chặt chẽ, không thể tách rời – closely connected, intertwined, inseparably tied) to the strength of a nation’s educational backbone.

In conclusion, while multiple elements determine national success, education stands out as the most influential driver of long-term prosperity and societal well-being.

✳️ New Vocabulary Explained:

1. Telling indicator – dấu hiệu rõ ràng (shows something clearly)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Economic development is often regarded as the most telling indicator..."

2. Critical dimensions – khía cạnh quan trọng (important aspects)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...various other critical dimensions must be considered..."

3. Well-rounded evaluation – đánh giá toàn diện
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...to provide a more well-rounded evaluation."

4. Educational attainment – trình độ học vấn đạt được
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Beyond GDP, educational attainment is a cornerstone..."

5. Cornerstone – nền tảng
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...is a cornerstone of a nation’s prosperity."

6. Equitable access – sự tiếp cận công bằng
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...to provide equitable access to quality education..."

7. Globally competitive – có tính cạnh tranh toàn cầu
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...with a globally competitive economy."

8. Public healthcare infrastructure – cơ sở hạ tầng y tế công cộng
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Furthermore, the availability and quality of public healthcare infrastructure..."

9. Universal healthcare – chăm sóc sức khỏe toàn dân
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...thanks to universal healthcare..."

10. Pivotal role – vai trò then chốt
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...education plays the most pivotal role..."

11. World-class education system – hệ thống giáo dục đẳng cấp thế giới
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Take Singapore, for example. Its world-class education system..."

12. Inextricably linked – gắn bó chặt chẽ
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...achievements are inextricably linked to the strength of a nation’s educational backbone."

🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms of Key Vocab

• Telling indicator

  • Synonyms: revealing sign, clear signal, strong clue

  • Antonyms: vague measure, hidden factor, ambiguous sign

• Pivotal role

  • Synonyms: central function, essential role, key part

  • Antonyms: minor influence, peripheral role, secondary effect

• Inextricably linked

  • Synonyms: tightly connected, interwoven, inseparable

  • Antonyms: loosely related, disconnected, independent

📘 Advanced Grammar Structures Used:

1. Reduced relative clause
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...education, including high school and college attendance, has transformed it..."
   → Rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ: "which includes high school..."

   → Dịch: Giáo dục, bao gồm việc học trung học và đại học, đã biến nó thành...

2. Cleft sentence for emphasis
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "It is education that plays the most pivotal role..." (paraphrased form)
   → Câu nhấn mạnh bằng cấu trúc "It is... that..."

   → Dịch: Chính giáo dục mới đóng vai trò then chốt nhất...

3. Passive voice with modal verbs
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...doctors and nurses need to be trained..."
   → Dạng bị động với động từ khiếm khuyết

   → Dịch: Các bác sĩ và y tá cần được đào tạo...

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