Giải đề"Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn rất kĩ cách học IELTS SPEAKING hiệu quả, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm Giải đề"Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety
    • Main idea 1: Investing in comprehensive driver education programs can enhance individuals' understanding of road safety, leading to better decision-making on the road.
      • Supporting idea: This knowledge is fundamental to safe driving, as it ensures that drivers are aware of the legal requirements and expectations on the road.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Example: The UK's Driving Theory Test, a prerequisite for practical driving lessons, evaluates individuals' understanding of traffic rules, road signs, and hazard perception, with research indicating that successful completion is associated with safer driving practices and reduced accident rates due to a solid foundation in road safety principles.
    • Main idea 2: Supporters of alternative measures often highlight the role of technology in preventing accidents. 
      • Supporting idea: Advanced safety features in vehicles, improved road infrastructure, and the implementation of smart traffic management systems are seen as effective ways to reduce the likelihood of accidents.
      • Example: Anti-lock Braking Systems (ABS), now a standard feature in most vehicles, prevent wheel lock during braking, enabling improved steering control and maneuverability in emergency situations, thereby reducing the risk of crashes.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main  idea 1: Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a severe punishment is vital considering its deterrent effect on those who are likely to disobey road regulations)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting  idea: 
        • There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences.
        • Drivers and pedestrians become more aware of traffic laws and demonstrate improved law compliance, since they know the serious consequences of their risky actions.
      • Example: 
        • For example, Australia is one of the safest countries all over the world simply because traffic violators are fined more  seriously than some other countries. An instance is drivers will be detained if they are found to have drunk driving, and a severe fine will be applied for over speeding rather than just verbal warning in some other places.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
        • For example, in Vietnam, a motorist not wearing helmet can be fined with $20 to $40, and thus he will be in fear of facing further punishment and avoid committing another offense
    • Main  idea 2: More stringent punishments for traffic crimes can be an efficient way to reduce traffic accidents   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Imposing more severe punishments on those who commit driving offences can somehow help increase road safety)
      • Supporting  idea: Once harsher laws related to road safety are implemented >>  a notable reduction in the total number of traffic accidents.
      • Example: In Vietnam,  very loosely enforced regulations = a significant number of annual road casualties
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