Phân tích"The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 9/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 9/12/2022)

Phân tích"The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 9/12/2022)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea 1:  the advanced technology which has been developed and used in space exploration does have practical applications in our daily lives >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "practical" 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
        • A great example is GPS, which is used as the fundamental system to develop many applications in taxi and delivery services such as Uber or Grab.
        • Satellites sent to the space can observe what is happening on Earth, and therefore, can provide highly accurate forecasts about the weather and more importantly, the potential occurrence of natural disasters such as typhoons or devastating storms. Without these forecasts, a considerable number of human lives would be at risk each year
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Thanks to space exploration programs we are discovering many things that help us understand the universe. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "universe" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: For instance, learning about planets, comets, stars, etc. can help us find solutions for some of the problems our civilization will face, such as overpopulation and the need to colonize other planets. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "solution" tiếng anh
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các main idea khác:
    • Main idea: Investments in space exploration hold the ultimate key to the human race’s long-term existence  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "invest" tiếng anh 
    • Main idea: space exploration has opened up new opportunities that may solve some pre-existing energy problems on Earth better than many other energy technologies.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: The depletion of fossil fuels, for example, can be well-addressed by a space technology called space-based solar power, which has been proven to be far more efficient than traditional solar cells, because in space no incoming solar energy is lost by reflection and absorption.

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