Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 20/11/2021)
I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- The UK invested more in cars, books, and cameras, while France did so in the other two categories: computers and perfume.
- It is noteworthy that both nations allocated the highest expenditures to automobiles, with the most significant spending gap observed in the cameras category.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 1: Viết về Cars, Books & Cameras (Những categories mà UK > France (bao gồm Cars, Books, Cameras) —> khi phân tích 3 categories này thì mình sẽ nêu và so sánh số liệu của UK & France ra cho từng categories)
- The UK allocated a greater amount of funds to the purchase of cars, books, and cameras compared to France.
- In the category of cars, the UK's expenditure slightly exceeded 450,000 pounds, while France spent about 55,000 pounds less.
- The spending disparity increased for books, but both countries spent less on books than on cars, with the UK spending around 400,000 pounds and France around 300,000 pounds.
- The most significant spending gap was observed in the cameras category, where France's expenditure was more than twice as small, at 150,000 pounds, compared to the UK's slightly over 350,000 pounds.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
- Body 2: Viết về Computers & Perfume (Những categories mà UK < France (bao gồm Computers, Perfume) —> khi phân tích 2 categories này thì mình sẽ nêu và so sánh số liệu của UK & France ra cho từng categories)
- France outspent the UK on computers and perfume.
- France's expenditure on computers was approximately 380,000 pounds, surpassing the UK's 350,000 pounds.
- However, the amounts spent on perfume were considerably lower, with figures of 200,000 pounds for France and just under 150,000 pounds for the UK.
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The bar chart compares how much the UK and France spent on five types of consumer goods in 2010, measured in pounds sterling.
Overall, the UK consistently outspent France in most categories, particularly on cars and cameras, while France spent slightly more on computers and perfume.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
The British spent the most on cars, with over £450,000, compared to around £400,000 by the French. Similarly, the UK allocated the highest amount to books (approximately £400,000), which was significantly higher than the figure for France. The most notable gap can be seen in camera spending: while the British spent nearly £350,000, France only spent half that amount.
By contrast, France’s spending on computers slightly exceeded that of the UK, at around £380,000 and £360,000 respectively. A similar pattern is seen with perfume, where the French expenditure stood at £200,000, whereas the British spent about £150,000.
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