Giải đề"THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 18/1/2024)

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 18/1/2024)

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000

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  • Overall:
    • The employment rates for men exceeded those for women in the specified age group during both years, with Japan leading in both gender categories. 
    • There was an overall decrease in employment among individuals aged 60-64 across the four countries.
  • Body 1:
    • During 1970, Japan exhibited the highest employment rate among males aged 60-64 at 85%, followed closely by Belgium at 79%, Australia at 76%, and the US at 73%. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • By 2000, although Japan retained the highest employment rate for men in this age group compared to the other nations, it had decreased to 74%. Concurrently, the other countries demonstrated similar patterns, with Belgium experiencing the most significant decline, reaching 19%.
  • Body 2: 
    • In the case of women within the same age range, Japan maintained the highest employment rates, starting at 43% in 1970 and decreasing to 40% by 2000. 
    • This stood in sharp contrast to Belgium, which, despite a negligible drop from 8% to 7%, consistently reported the lowest figures. 
    • Conversely, the US and Australia witnessed upward trends in the employment rates of 60-64 year-old women, with the former increasing from 36% to 39% and the latter from 16% to 18% by 2000.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart compares the proportions of men and women aged 60–64 who were in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Overall, employment participation (mức độ tham gia lao động – the level of workforce involvement) among this age group declined in most nations, and men consistently recorded higher figures than women.

In 1970, Japan registered the highest share of working men, at 85%, followed by Belgium, Australia and the US. By 2000, Japan still led this age group, though its rate underwent a notable downturn (sự suy giảm đáng chú ý – a clearly observable decline) to 74%. The remaining countries also witnessed declining patterns, with Belgium showing the most dramatic fall to just 19%.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Regarding women, Japan again held the highest levels, dropping slightly from 43% to 40% over the period. In contrast, Belgium reported the lowest employment among older females, remaining almost unchanged. Meanwhile, the US and Australia experienced modest upswings (sự tăng nhẹ – small but steady increases) in women’s employment, rising to 39% and 18% respectively.

New Vocabulary List

1. employment participation (mức độ tham gia lao động – the level of workforce involvement)
   Synonyms: workforce engagement, labour-force involvement, employment involvement
   Antonyms: withdrawal from work, labour inactivity, workforce disengagement
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Overall, employment participation among this age group declined…”

2. underwent a notable downturn (sự suy giảm đáng chú ý – a clearly observable decline)
   Synonyms: experienced a decline, saw a drop, witnessed a fall
   Antonyms: experienced a rise, saw an improvement, witnessed a surge
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Japan… underwent a notable downturn to 74%.”

3. modest upswings (sự tăng nhẹ – small but steady increases)
   Synonyms: slight increases, mild growth, moderate rises
   Antonyms: sharp drops, steep declines, significant decreases
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The US and Australia experienced modest upswings in women’s employment…”

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