Giải đề"The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years of 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 7/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years of 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 7/10/2023)

The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years of 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work.

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  • Overall:
    • Illness consistently remained the primary reason for work absence, although the opposite was true for stress.
    • While the percentages of respondents reporting work absences due to illness and family duties decreased, there were upward trends in those attributing it to stress, personal needs, and unexpected problems.
  • Body 1: Viết về ILLNESS + FAMILY RESPONSIBILITY
    • Viết về ILLNESS
      • In the initial year, nearly 45% of individuals cited illness as the cause of their work absence. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Despite a gradual decline to 35% over a decade, this reason remained the most common throughout the period. 
    • Viết về FAMILY RESPONSIBILITY
      • Family obligations exhibited a similar trend, starting at approximately 27% and then stabilizing at just above 25% from 2005 to 2010.
  • Body 2: 3 CATEGORIES CÒN LẠI 
    • Viết về PERSONAL NEEDS 
      • About 14% of respondents mentioned personal needs, like appointments, as the reason for their work absence, with a subsequent increase of around one-tenth by 2010. 
    • Viết về STRESS
      • Stress experienced a slower growth rate, starting at approximately 6% and reaching around 12% in the final year. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Viết về UNEXPECTED PROBLEMS 
      • An increase was also observed in the proportion of respondents citing unexpected issues (transport, weather, etc.), growing from around 8% to peaking at close to 15% after 5 years before a minor decrease in 2010.

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