Giải đề"The charts below shows the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 9/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The charts below shows the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 9/10/2023)

The charts below shows the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland from 1988 to 2008

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  • Overall:
    • There was a notable decrease in Ireland's unemployment rate, and the number of individuals leaving the country decreased for most of the period under examination, with the exception of the period 2004-2008.
  • Body 1: Viết về “people leaving Ireland”
    • Beginning with 60,000 emigrants in 1988, this figure declined to around 55,000 in 1990 before dropping to over 30,000 after two years. 
    • The number of individuals leaving Ireland continued to decrease to approximately 27,000 for the next 12 years, only to experience a sudden surge to 50,000 in 2008.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Viết về “unemployment rate”
    • There was a slight reduction from approximately 16% in 1988 to just under 14% in 1990, followed by a slight increase to about 15% two years later. 
    • Subsequently, the rate dropped significantly to 4% in the year 2000, with six years of stability. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • However, in the final year, Ireland's unemployment rate increased to nearly 6%.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The charts illustrate the unemployment rate (tỷ lệ thất nghiệp – the proportion of jobless individuals within the workforce) and the volume of emigration (lượng di cư – the total number of people leaving a country to settle elsewhere) in Ireland between 1988 and 2008.

Overall, both indicators displayed a downward trajectory (xu hướng giảm – a consistent pattern of decline) for most of the period, though both showed a dramatic upswing (sự tăng mạnh – a sudden and sharp rise) in the final years.

Regarding emigration, the number of people leaving Ireland stood at about 60,000 in 1988, falling steadily to around 30,000 in 1992. This figure then remained relatively stable at roughly 27,000 for more than a decade, before undergoing a sharp resurgence (sự phục hồi mạnh – a sudden and significant increase again), almost doubling to 50,000 by 2008.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Turning to unemployment, the rate dipped slightly from 16% in 1988 to under 14% in 1990, but rose again to nearly 15% two years later. From that point, it fell markedly to 4% by 2000, maintaining this low plateau (mức thấp ổn định – a prolonged stable level) for six years. In the final phase, however, unemployment registered a notable increase, climbing to nearly 6% by 2008.

📌 New Vocabulary with Definitions (English + Vietnamese)

1. unemployment rate (tỷ lệ thất nghiệp – the proportion of jobless individuals within the workforce)

2. volume of emigration (lượng di cư – the total number of people leaving a country to settle elsewhere)

3. downward trajectory (xu hướng giảm – a consistent pattern of decline)

4. dramatic upswing (sự tăng mạnh – a sudden and sharp rise)

5. sharp resurgence (sự phục hồi mạnh – a sudden and significant increase again)

6. low plateau (mức thấp ổn định – a prolonged stable level)

📌 Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Unemployment rate

• Synonyms: joblessness, redundancy, idleness

• Antonyms: employment, occupation, workforce participation

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Turning to unemployment, the rate dipped slightly from 16% in 1988…”

2. Downward trajectory

• Synonyms: decline, downturn, regression

• Antonyms: growth, expansion, escalation

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Overall, both indicators displayed a downward trajectory for most of the period…”

3. Sharp resurgence

• Synonyms: rebound, recovery, revival

• Antonyms: collapse, downturn, deterioration

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…before undergoing a sharp resurgence, almost doubling to 50,000 by 2008.”

📌 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Complex sentence with concessive clause

• “Overall, both indicators displayed a downward trajectory for most of the period, though both showed a dramatic upswing in the final years.”
  👉 Translation: Mặc dù cả hai đều có xu hướng giảm trong phần lớn giai đoạn, nhưng cả hai lại cho thấy sự tăng mạnh trong những năm cuối.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

1. Relative clause

• “The charts illustrate the unemployment rate and the volume of emigration in Ireland between 1988 and 2008.”
  👉 Translation: Biểu đồ minh họa tỷ lệ thất nghiệp và lượng di cư tại Ireland trong giai đoạn 1988 đến 2008.

1. Participle clause

• “…the number of people leaving Ireland stood at about 60,000 in 1988, falling steadily to around 30,000 in 1992.”
  👉 Translation: Số người rời khỏi Ireland ở mức khoảng 60.000 vào năm 1988, giảm đều đặn xuống còn khoảng 30.000 vào năm 1992.

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