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🔥Giải đề"The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 7/3/2024)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

May 2, 2025

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn 🔥Giải đề"The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 7/3/2024)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

I. Đề bài

The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

The diagram illustrates a step-by-step process (quy trình từng bước – a detailed, ordered set of actions) for producing jam from fruit, beginning with raw ingredients and ending with the final consumption stage (giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối – when the product is eaten).

Initially, 4 kilograms of fruit are thoroughly washed (rửa kỹ – cleaned carefully) under running water. The clean fruit is then mashed using a hand-held masher (dụng cụ nghiền cầm tay – a manual tool used for crushing fruit) and transferred into a pot. This mixture is heated at a high temperature (nhiệt độ cao) for ten minutes with 1 cup of water, ¼ cup of sugar, and 2 tablespoons of peanuts added.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In the next heat-intensive phase (giai đoạn cần nhiệt độ cao – stage that involves high heat), 4 cups of water and 2 more cups of sugar are incorporated and boiled for half an hour. Afterward, the jam is poured into airtight containers (hộp kín khí – sealed jars that prevent air from entering) and left to sit with lids tightly closed for one day.

Finally, the jam reaches its ready-to-eat condition (trạng thái sẵn sàng để ăn) and is consumed, for instance, during family breakfast.

📝 New Vocabulary List

  1. Step-by-step process (quy trình từng bước) – a series of actions done in a specific sequence
    Synonyms: sequential procedure, ordered steps, progressive stages
    Antonyms: random procedure, disorderly method, chaotic sequence
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The diagram illustrates a step-by-step process for producing jam...”

  2. Final consumption stage (giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối) – the last step where a product is used or eaten
    Synonyms: end-use phase, final usage, utilization point
    Antonyms: initial phase, production start, raw stage
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...ending with the final consumption stage.”

  3. Thoroughly washed (rửa kỹ) – cleaned very carefully
    Synonyms: meticulously cleaned, scrubbed, rinsed well
    Antonyms: lightly rinsed, unclean, neglected
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...fruit are thoroughly washed under running water.”

  4. Hand-held masher (dụng cụ nghiền cầm tay) – a tool held in the hand to mash ingredients
    Synonyms: manual masher, kitchen crusher, fruit press
    Antonyms: automatic blender, machine tool, electric mixer
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...mashed using a hand-held masher.”

  5. Heat-intensive phase (giai đoạn cần nhiệt độ cao) – a stage requiring prolonged heating
    Synonyms: boiling stage, cooking phase, thermal step
    Antonyms: cooling phase, freezing step, room-temperature process
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “In the next heat-intensive phase...”

  6. Airtight containers (hộp kín khí) – sealed jars that keep air out
    Synonyms: sealed jars, vacuum-sealed containers, airtight jars
    Antonyms: open container, loose lid jar, ventilated box
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...poured into airtight containers...”

  7. Ready-to-eat condition (trạng thái sẵn sàng để ăn) – the product is fully prepared and safe to consume
    Synonyms: edible form, finished state, consumable condition
    Antonyms: uncooked state, incomplete form, raw condition
    IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...reaches its ready-to-eat condition...”

🔁 Advanced Grammar Structures & Analysis

  1. Passive voice

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...fruit are thoroughly washed...”
      Quả được rửa kỹ lưỡng
      ✅ Used to emphasize the process rather than the actor.

  2. Reduced relative clause

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...mashed using a hand-held masher...” (instead of “which is mashed using...”)
      Được nghiền bằng dụng cụ cầm tay
      ✅ Concise and academic structure.

  3. Compound adjectives

    • “step-by-step process”, “heat-intensive phase”, “ready-to-eat condition”, “hand-held masher”, “airtight containers”
      ✅ These are typical of Band 8.0-level vocabulary, conveying precision and fluency.

  4. Complex noun phrases

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...final consumption stage during family breakfast”
      Giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối cùng trong bữa sáng gia đình
      ✅ Academic and information-rich phrases.

  5. Sequencing with transitions

    • “Initially… In the next phase… Afterward… Finally…”
      ✅ Clearly shows chronological stages—vital in process writing.

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