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The graph below shows the participation of Australian children in sports outside school hours in 2014

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  • Overall:
    • While boys show higher participation rates in football and basketball, girls exhibit more interest in netball, with swimming being the only sport where gender participation is relatively balanced.
  • Body 1: Football + Basketball
    • Football emerges as the favored sport among boys, with 25% engaging in it, contrasting sharply with girls, where only 5% participate. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Concerning basketball, boys display a slightly higher engagement at 10% compared to girls, who participate at approximately 13%. 
  • Body 2: Còn lại 
    • Netball attracts approximately 23% of girls, significantly exceeding the 8% of boys involved in the sport. 
    • Swimming, however, demonstrates similar participation rates among boys (17%) and girls (22%).
    • The data indicates that the least popular option for both genders is choosing not to participate in any sports, with boys at 5% and girls at approximately 6%. 

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