Giải đề"Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

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Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally  (advantages > disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: A newly invented language could be designed to be simpler and more regular than existing languages, potentially making it easier to learn for people from diverse linguistic backgrounds.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many natural languages have irregularities in their grammar, pronunciation, and spelling, which can be confusing for learners. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • By designing a language with consistent rules and patterns, learners can more easily grasp the structure and usage of the language.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: A new language could be crafted to be culturally neutral, avoiding biases and privileging no particular culture or nation.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A culturally neutral language can foster inclusivity by avoiding favoritism towards any specific culture or nation. 
        • This promotes equality and reduces the potential for discrimination based on linguistic or cultural differences.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: A newly invented language could be designed to be simpler and more regular than existing languages, potentially making it easier to learn for people from diverse linguistic backgrounds.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Many natural languages have irregularities in their grammar, pronunciation, and spelling, which can be confusing for learners. 
          • By designing a language with consistent rules and patterns, learners can more easily grasp the structure and usage of the language.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
      • Main idea 2: A new language could be crafted to be culturally neutral, avoiding biases and privileging no particular culture or nation.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • A culturally neutral language can foster inclusivity by avoiding favoritism towards any specific culture or nation. 
          • This promotes equality and reduces the potential for discrimination based on linguistic or cultural differences.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Adopting a new international language might lead to the erosion of cultural diversity as unique languages and dialects fade into obscurity.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When a dominant international language is adopted for communication purposes, speakers of minority languages may gradually shift towards the dominant language, leading to language loss. 
          • This shift can result from social, economic, or political pressures, ultimately contributing to the decline of linguistic diversity.
        • Example: Scotland and Ireland have rich Gaelic language heritages, with Scottish Gaelic and Irish Gaelic holding distinct histories and cultural importance, once widely spoken but now facing dramatic decline due to the rise of English, which became dominant through colonization and political changes, leading to pressures for adoption, causing a loss of unique words, expressions, and storytelling traditions, although ongoing efforts persist to revitalize these endangered languages.
      • Main idea 2: People might resist learning a new language, especially if they already speak a widely used language like English, Mandarin, or Spanish.
        • Supporting idea:
          • Individuals may perceive learning a new language as impractical if they believe they can communicate effectively in their native language or a widely spoken lingua franca like English. 
          • They may prioritize other skills or pursuits over language learning, especially if they don't foresee immediate benefits from mastering a new language.

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