Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 7/3/2024)

The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.

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  • Overall:
    • There was a consistent increase in the proportion of Australian workers involved in the service sector, accompanied by a decline in manufacturing and agriculture. 
    • Throughout the entire period, services consistently held the largest share of the total workforce.
  • Body 1: Viết về số liệu tăng + Số liệu có xu hướng không thay đổi nhiều lắm 
    • Initially, in 1962, the proportion of service industry employees constituted over 50% and progressively rose to nearly 80% over the subsequent five decades>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • The workforce in the construction sector began at approximately 10% and maintained this level until 2012. Similarly, the mining industry exhibited a comparable pattern, commencing at 0% and marginally increasing to slightly above 0%.
  • Body 2: Viết về xu hướng giảm 
    • Contrastingly, both the manufacturing and agriculture sectors experienced a gradual decline from 1962 to 2012. 
    • In 1962, manufacturing and agriculture employment started at around 25% and 10%, respectively. 
    • Over the following 50 years, the percentage of manufacturing workers decreased by 15%, while agriculture witnessed a decline of 10%, ultimately reaching just above 0% in 2012.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The graph illustrates the workforce distribution (English: the way workers are spread across industries / Vietnamese: sự phân bổ lực lượng lao động) across five sectors in Australia between 1962 and 2012.

Overall, there was a steadfast surge (English: a strong and steady increase / Vietnamese: sự gia tăng mạnh mẽ và ổn định) in the proportion of Australian employees engaged in the service-based sector (English: industries providing services rather than goods / Vietnamese: ngành dịch vụ), while product-oriented industries (English: industries producing tangible products / Vietnamese: ngành sản xuất sản phẩm hữu hình) such as manufacturing and agriculture suffered a persistent decline. Throughout the entire period, services remained the dominant employer.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Initially, in 1962, over half of Australian workers were employed in services, and this figure consistently ascended (English: steadily rose / Vietnamese: tăng đều đặn) to nearly 80% by 2012. The workforce in construction remained relatively static, holding steady at approximately 10% over the five decades. Similarly, the mining industry exhibited a minuscule rise (English: a very small increase / Vietnamese: sự tăng rất nhỏ), moving from 0% to slightly above 0% without any substantial fluctuation (English: major change / Vietnamese: sự dao động lớn).

In contrast, manufacturing and agriculture sectors underwent a gradual contraction (English: slow reduction / Vietnamese: sự thu hẹp dần dần). Manufacturing employment, which accounted for roughly a quarter of the workforce in 1962, dwindled (English: steadily decreased / Vietnamese: giảm dần) by about 15%. Agricultural employment, starting at approximately 10%, also plummeted (English: dropped sharply / Vietnamese: giảm mạnh) to just above 0% by the end of the period.

📚 Synonyms and Antonyms 

Example word: steadfast surge

• Synonyms:

  • steady climb

  • consistent increase

  • relentless growth

• Antonyms:

  • gradual decline

  • steady decrease

  • constant fall

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

  There was a steadfast surge in the proportion of Australian employees engaged in the service-based sector.

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