Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 30/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 30/4/2024)

The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport.

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  • Overall:
    • All types of vehicles witnessed an upward trend, except for aircrafts.
    • Ferry travel was the least utilized by tourists, while rail travel became the most popular towards the end of the period.
  • Body 1: Viết về category Rail, Coach
    • The percentage of tourists opting for rail travel stood at around 35% in 1989 and experienced notable growth over the years, surpassing both cars and airplanes to become the predominant mode by 2009, accounting for roughly 60% of travelers. 
    • Coach usage saw a steady increase from nearly 10% in 1989 to approximately 15% in 1999, eventually surging to over 25% by 2009.
  • Body 2: Viết về category Car, Air, Ferry
    • In 1989, almost half of all tourists used cars for travel within the country. This percentage grew over the next decade, peaking at 60% in 1999, before gradually declining to just over 50% in the final year. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Conversely, the proportion of tourists opting for air travel commenced at approximately 40% and steadily decreased over the entire duration, ultimately settling at about one-fifth by 2009.
    • Lastly, ferry travel remained the least favored choice among vacationers throughout the period, with less than 5% and 10% of users in 1989 and 2009, respectively, despite peaking at just over 10% in 2004.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The graph illustrates the proportions of tourists using various modes of transport to travel domestically between 1989 and 2009. Overall, all types of vehicles witnessed an upward trend (collocation: experienced growth – chứng kiến xu hướng tăng), except for aircrafts (n: airplanes used for passenger transport – máy bay). While ferry travel (compound noun: travelling by boat across short distances – di chuyển bằng phà) remained the least popular, rail travel emerged as the dominant form by the end of the period.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

At the start of the period, about 35% of tourists opted for rail travel (compound noun: travelling by train – di chuyển bằng tàu hỏa), which experienced notable growth (collocation: saw a significant rise – tăng đáng kể), reaching roughly 60% by 2009. Coach use rose steadily from around 10% in 1989 to over 25% two decades later.

In contrast, nearly half of tourists used cars in 1989, and although this share peaked (v: reached its highest point – đạt đỉnh) at 60% in 1999, it later declined slightly. Meanwhile, the proportion using air travel fell sharply from 40% to 20%, and ferries consistently accounted for the smallest share, remaining below 10% throughout.

New Vocabulary List

1. witnessed an upward trend (collocation: experienced growth – chứng kiến xu hướng tăng)

   • Synonyms: saw an increase, experienced a rise, showed growth

   • Antonyms: declined, decreased, dropped

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “All types of vehicles witnessed an upward trend, except for aircrafts.”

2. aircrafts (n: airplanes used for passenger transport – máy bay)

   • Synonyms: planes, jets, airliners

   • Antonyms: ships, trains, buses

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…except for aircrafts.”

3. ferry travel (compound noun: travelling by boat across short distances – di chuyển bằng phà)

   • Synonyms: boat transport, marine travel, sea transit

   • Antonyms: air travel, rail transport, land travel

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “While ferry travel remained the least popular…”

4. rail travel (compound noun: travelling by train – di chuyển bằng tàu hỏa)>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

   • Synonyms: train transport, railway journey, rail commuting

   • Antonyms: air travel, road travel, sea travel

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…about 35% of tourists opted for rail travel…”

5. experienced notable growth (collocation: saw a significant rise – tăng đáng kể)

   • Synonyms: rose remarkably, increased considerably, grew sharply

   • Antonyms: fell, declined, stagnated

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...which experienced notable growth, reaching roughly 60% by 2009.”

6. peaked (v: reached its highest point – đạt đỉnh)

   • Synonyms: climbed to the top, reached a maximum, culminated

   • Antonyms: dipped, fell, bottomed out

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...although this share peaked at 60% in 1999...”

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “While ferry travel remained the least popular, rail travel emerged as the dominant form by the end of the period.”

   • Structure: Complex contrast clause with “while”

   • Simpler version: “Ferry travel was the least used, but rail travel became the most used.”

   • Vietnamese: Mặc dù di chuyển bằng phà ít phổ biến nhất, nhưng đi tàu hỏa đã trở thành phương tiện chủ yếu vào cuối giai đoạn.

2. “Coach use rose steadily from around 10% in 1989 to over 25% two decades later.”

   • Structure: Adverb “steadily” modifying a verb to show gradual change

   • Simpler version: “The use of coaches increased slowly.”

   • Vietnamese: Việc sử dụng xe khách tăng đều đặn từ khoảng 10% năm 1989 lên hơn 25% hai thập kỷ sau.

3. “In contrast, nearly half of tourists used cars in 1989, and although this share peaked at 60% in 1999, it later declined slightly.”

   • Structure: Complex sentence with concessive clause (although...)

   • Simpler version: “Almost half used cars in 1989. This number went up to 60% and then dropped a bit.”

   • Vietnamese: Gần một nửa du khách sử dụng ô tô vào năm 1989, và mặc dù tỷ lệ này đạt đỉnh 60% vào năm 1999, nó sau đó giảm nhẹ.

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