🔥Giải đề"​The graph below shows the sale of five types of items in four different seasons in a departmental store in the US in 2011"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 30/12/2023)

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The graph below shows the sale of five types of items in four different seasons in a departmental store in the US in 2011

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  • Overall:
    • Autumn emerged as the most favored season for purchasing items compared to others
    • Women's clothing witnessed the highest sales, particularly dominating during winter.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 1: Women’s clothes + Men’s clothes
    • Women's clothes had a sale of 40000$ in winter, and it rose gradually until it reached to almost 11000$ by autumn . 
    • In winter, men's clothing contributed nearly $210,000 in sales to the store owner, with fluctuations of $20,000 in spring and $30,000 in autumn, ultimately reaching its peak sales in summer surpassing all other seasons.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
  • Body 2: Còn lại
    • Sports equipment started at around $230,000 in winter, showing an upward trend in spring, excluding summer, and achieving identical sales in spring and autumn, both amounting to $20,000.
    • Cosmetics yielded $210,000 in winter, experiencing a gradual increase, reaching nearly $450,000 by autumn, excluding spring. 
    • Although jewelry sales were at their lowest in winter and spring, totaling $190,000 and $180,000 respectively, there was a notable surge, with sales reaching almost $510,000 by autumn.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar graph illustrates the seasonal variation (English: change across seasons | Vietnamese: sự thay đổi theo mùa) in sales of five categories of items in a US departmental store in 2011.

Overall, autumn stood out (English: was clearly noticeable or significant | Vietnamese: nổi bật rõ ràng) as the most lucrative (English: highly profitable | Vietnamese: sinh lời nhiều) season for shopping, while women’s clothing topped sales, particularly during winter.

Women's apparel (English: clothing | Vietnamese: quần áo nữ) generated approximately $40,000 in winter and rose steadily (English: increased in a gradual, continuous manner | Vietnamese: tăng đều đặn) to almost $110,000 by autumn. In contrast, men’s outfits experienced moderate fluctuations (English: slight variations | Vietnamese: biến động nhẹ) across the year, peaking at $240,000 in summer.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Sports gear saw inconsistent performance (English: varied sales | Vietnamese: doanh thu không ổn định) with identical figures in spring and autumn (~$20,000). Cosmetic products enjoyed a progressive climb (English: continuous upward movement | Vietnamese: sự tăng trưởng đều) from $210,000 in winter to nearly $450,000 in autumn. Meanwhile, jewelry, despite starting at the lowest point, skyrocketed (English: increased dramatically | Vietnamese: tăng vọt) to nearly $510,000 by autumn.

📘 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. seasonal variation – change across seasons | sự thay đổi theo mùa

2. stood out – was clearly noticeable or significant | nổi bật

3. lucrative – highly profitable | sinh lời nhiều

4. women’s apparel – clothing | quần áo nữ

5. rose steadily – increased in a gradual way | tăng đều đặn

6. moderate fluctuations – slight variations | biến động nhẹ

7. inconsistent performance – varied sales | hiệu suất không ổn định

8. progressive climb – continuous growth | tăng trưởng đều

9. skyrocketed – increased dramatically | tăng vọt

📘 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• Autumn stood out as the most lucrative season

• Women’s apparel rose steadily to $110,000

• Men’s outfits experienced moderate fluctuations

• Cosmetic products enjoyed a progressive climb

• Jewelry sales skyrocketed to $510,000

📘 Grammar Structures & Vietnamese Translation

1. “The bar graph illustrates the seasonal variation in sales…”
   → Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn với danh từ ghép "seasonal variation" làm chủ ngữ
   → Biểu đồ cột minh họa sự thay đổi theo mùa trong doanh số bán hàng...

2. “Women’s apparel generated approximately $40,000 in winter and rose steadily…”
   → Liên kết hai hành động bằng liên từ "and", sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn và cấu trúc động từ nội động từ tăng dần (rose steadily)
   → Quần áo nữ tạo ra khoảng 40.000 đô mùa đông và tăng đều đặn...

3. “Jewelry, despite starting at the lowest point, skyrocketed to nearly $510,000…”
   → Mệnh đề nhượng bộ với "despite + V-ing", sử dụng động từ "skyrocket" như động từ nội động từ mạnh
   → Trang sức, dù bắt đầu ở mức thấp nhất, đã tăng vọt tới gần 510.000 đô...

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