Giải đề"The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi 28/10/2023 & 10/3/2024)

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The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site

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  • Overall:
    • The most prominent alterations will involve adding new structures to the northern and eastern parts of the location, as well as renaming specific areas and their amenities.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1
    • The current entrance and reception are presently situated in the northern area.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • To the east of the site, there is a factory, and in the west, the packing and storage area is located, with offices and the canteen situated in the south
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • The plan proposes the replacement of the entrance and reception with residential areas, including six-bedroom houses accessible via communal gardens.
    • On the eastern side of the site, it is anticipated that the factory will be replaced with apartment buildings, positioned adjacent to the newly constructed parking area.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
    • The western section's packing and storage areas are slated to be replaced by three-bedroom and four-bedroom houses, while the plan recommends replacing offices and the canteen with parking garages
    • The only feature expected to remain in its original location is the main road encircling the entire area.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The two maps illustrate a redevelopment blueprint (redevelopment blueprint: bản kế hoạch tái phát triển – a detailed plan for renovating or transforming an area) for an industrial site.

Overall, the most significant changes will involve the transformation (transformation: sự thay đổi hoàn toàn – a complete or major change) of facilities in the northern and eastern zones (zones: khu vực – distinct areas) and the rebranding (rebranding: việc đổi tên hoặc hình ảnh – changing the identity or name of a place) of existing areas.

In the current layout (layout: bố cục – the arrangement of features), the entrance and reception are located in the northern fringe (fringe: rìa, mép – outer edge), with a factory to the east and a cluster of offices and a canteen (cluster: cụm – a group of similar structures) in the south. The packing and storage facilities occupy the western area.

In the proposed plan, the entrance and reception will be replaced with residential units (residential units: các khu nhà ở – housing structures), including six-bedroom homes arranged around shared green spaces (shared green spaces: không gian xanh chung – communal gardens). The factory is set to be replaced by apartment complexes (apartment complexes: khu chung cư – multi-unit residential buildings) adjacent to a newly established parking area. The western section will house three- and four-bedroom homes, and the southern offices and canteen will give way to a multi-level parking garage (multi-level parking garage: bãi đỗ xe nhiều tầng – a structure with several floors for vehicle parking). The only unchanged feature (unchanged feature: đặc điểm không thay đổi – a part that remains the same) is the encircling main road (encircling: bao quanh – surrounding).

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ The only feature expected to remain in its original location is the main road encircling the entire area.
   → Mệnh đề bị động với cụm danh từ làm chủ ngữ + mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn
   → Cấu trúc này giúp bài viết tự nhiên và trang trọng hơn
   → Câu dịch: Đặc điểm duy nhất dự kiến vẫn giữ nguyên vị trí ban đầu là con đường chính bao quanh toàn khu vực.

2. .IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ..including six-bedroom homes arranged around shared green spaces.
   → Mệnh đề rút gọn (past participle) – arranged ~ which are arranged
   → Câu dịch: Bao gồm những ngôi nhà sáu phòng ngủ được sắp xếp quanh không gian xanh chung.

3. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ ...that will be replaced by apartment complexes, positioned adjacent to the newly established parking area.
   → Mệnh đề rút gọn + từ nối chỉ vị trí (adjacent to)
   → Câu dịch: ...sẽ được thay thế bởi các khu chung cư, nằm liền kề với khu đỗ xe mới xây dựng.

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