Phân tích"Governments should support care vs finance for retired people while others believe that they should save money when they get older. Discuss both views and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 28-6-2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Governments should support care vs finance for retired people while others believe that they should save money when they get older. Discuss both views and give your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 28-6-2022)

Governments should support care & finance for retired people while others believe that they should save money when they get older. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm they should save money when they get older.
    • Main idea 1: a culture of saving rather than depending on the government may foster the overall economic development of a country. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE "THE GOVERNMENT" IELTS
      • Supporting idea:  
        • If people were to accumulate their own savings for their pension age, it would lessen the financial burden on the government. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "accumulate" tiếng anh 
        • The government would be able to release more funds to more productive purposes, such as development of infrastructure, industries, hospitals, and so on, which may expedite the overall progression of a country. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PARAPHRASE "AND SO ON"
      • Example:
    • Main idea 2: Since savings-oriented people are not dependent on the state for their living expenses, this may instill a sense of self-respect and pride in them.
      • Supporting idea: In order to live a life with dignity and pride, taking responsibility for funding one’s own retirement is evidently a better option from individual perspective.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Governments should support care & finance for retired people & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: each of them has certain contributions to society.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Economically, some people enrich the national budget through the taxes they pay, while others spend money on commodities and services when going shopping, which allows businesses to earn profits and pay taxes as well.
        • As a way of compensation for their devotion in their youth, the government ought to offer the elderly money-related assistance and care services, for example, regular free-of-charge health checkup. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for example" tiếng anh 
        • The age pensions scheme can help the aged community who could no longer earn money get access to basic amenities in life, including accommodation, food, and medical care.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:  it is increasingly common for the aged now to live all alone without their family around, therefore they should receive proper care and support from nursing homes.
      • Supporting idea: The social life and the help of professionals at such places can stop them from feeling isolated and depressed, providing them a sense of community.
      • Example: 

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