Phân tích"Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?"(kèm bài sửa)

· Writing,Task 2

Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích essay về "Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries"

I. Đề bài

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

Dạng 2 question có thể chia bố cục như sau:

  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi Why is this the case?
    • Main idea 1: tourism industries giải quyết bài toán việc làm
      • Main idea: Growing travel and tourism industry is creating millions of jobs
      • Supporting idea: As of now, there are endless job opportunities for the youth in travel agencies, tour operators, ticketing officers, transport officers, logistics, hotel management, airlines, and cruises.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  TỪ VỰNG IELTS TOPIC "TRAVEL" 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: tourism industries giúp phát triển kinh tế 
      • Main idea: Another primary reason for developing tourism in a country is due to the economic benefits that it brings. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A well-developed tourism industry creates a lot of new businesses and jobs for local people, and an influx of money from foreign tourists.(IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Tourism has become one of the major players in international commerce, with many statistics indicating that the revenue it brings equals or even surpasses that of many industrial fields such as garment, food production or oil exports)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "trip" tiếng anh
        • Any country endowed with natural beauties and historic sites can take advantage of those precious sources to boost their economy.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Is it a positive development? 
    • Positive development vì 2 lí do sau:
      • Main idea 1: cải thiện đời sống người dân ở các nước developing countries
        • Main idea: In cases of developing countries where technology in industrial areas is somewhat inferior todeveloped ones, tourism is deemed instrumental inpromoting economic well-being
        • Supporting idea: It helps generate great profits and also provides jobs for inhabitants living in tourist destinations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  PHÂN BIỆT JOURNEY, TRIP, TRAVEL & VOYAGE TIẾNG ANH
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: tourism industries giúp giao thoa văn hoá 
        • Main idea: promoting international tourism can help to improve international relations with other countries, and to share a country’s customs and culture with people all around the world. 
        • Supporting idea: Many people these days are interested in learning about different cultures and ways of living, and tourism helps to facilitate this experience.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"journey"tiếng anh
        • Example: 

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