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I. Đề bài
Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think having a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Từ vựng topic Leader
Từ vựng topic Leader mà IELTS TUTOR đã tổng hợp
III. Phân tích đề
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: it is usually difficult for the young to compete with the old in terms of experience (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: years of experience in a relevant position tend to make the elderly better candidates than those who are relatively young and new to the tasks) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Those who have gained adequate experience can more effectively manage to lead the individuals of an organization than those who do not >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt "experience" và "experiences" trong tiếng anh
- Business matters often require the people in charge to have not only the knowledge of coping with problematic situations but also strong nerves to calmly find a feasible solution.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: it is usually difficult for the young to compete with the old in terms of experience (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: years of experience in a relevant position tend to make the elderly better candidates than those who are relatively young and new to the tasks) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: older people seem to be more respected than others and have a more powerful voice within a company (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they are likely to receive more support from the people in an organization)
- Supporting idea:
- Employees are more likely to follow their orders, and so they could easily run the operation of the company >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Diễn đạt "trải qua giai đoạn..." (Cách paraphrase "undergo")
- As the time spent working with the staff of the senior is often longer, they can understand their colleagues better, achieving more popularity >< Younger members will need more time to make contributions over time to prove themselves worthy. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Các từ / cấu trúc thường được paraphrase IELTS WRITING
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: older people seem to be more respected than others and have a more powerful voice within a company (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they are likely to receive more support from the people in an organization)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
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