Phân tích"Young people are committing more crimes. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 18/6)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Young people are committing more crimes. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 18/6)

I. Đề bài

Young people are committing more crimes. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: children are neglected simply because many parents in cities now both have to work so are often not around to give their children support when needed.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "support" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
          • In order for a child to grow up in a balanced way, it is very important that he or she is nurtured well by his or her parents.
          • Without supervision from parents or caregivers, children’s extreme behaviours such as aggression, hostility or defiance are given free rein to develop in their later lives  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "nurture" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Another factor is the increasing levels of poverty around the world.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • We have seen with globalization the rich get richer and the poor get poorer, and this inevitably means that those who are poorer will have to resort to illegal means to get what others have (Of course, this will include the children in the poorer families)  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Young people with little savings are often the most vulnerable since they have fewer employable skills and less work experience)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • When the economy is in decline and fewer jobs are available, crime rates naturally rise as a result. 
        • Example:  This has been exacerbated in the last 2 years as Covid-19 has decimated national economies and put millions out of work. 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: Parents have to take more responsibility for their children’s actions. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They too should be punished if their children commit crime
          • Throughout education, the youth can realise their wrongful actions and be given opportunities to turn over a new leaf and transform themselves into useful members of society later in life.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Crime rates among younger individuals will recede with economic stimulus plans directed at job creation and education.
        • Supporting idea:
          • The countries that have been able to survive and prosper during economic uncertainty tend to be those with mature economies, flexible governments, and a well-educated populace. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
          • The result of individuals having jobs is the motive for crime disappears in the vast majority of cases and police can focus on less common causes such as mental illness, greed, and jealousy.
        • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác:
    • Main idea: There is a direct correlation between the lack of engagement in educational activities and serious criminal offending in children. 
      • Supporting idea: Out of boredom, children befriend antisocial peers and will gradually copy their behaviours. 
    • Main idea: Media also plays an enormous role in shaping children’s criminality. 
      • Supporting idea: Games such as grand theft auto can desensitise younger players to extreme acts of violence and cruelty, encourage them to commit crimes while giving them the impression that it is morally acceptable to do so.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH

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