Phân tích bài mẫu về good members of the society IELTS WRITING TASK 2
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I. Đề bài
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Từ vựng topic children
IELTS TUTOR đã tổng hợp từ vựng topic children nhớ tham khảo kĩ
III. Phân tích
1. Lưu ý
Lưu ý cho đề này:
2. Phân chia bố cục
Thông thường Introduction của dạng Discuss both views and give your opinion sẽ chia làm 2 câu
3. Bài mẫu
It is a widely held belief that parent should teach the children how to be good members of the society but there is a strong counter-argument amongst sections of people that school is the right place to teach children. However, I think that schools should consider this as their responsibility instead of relying on parents to do this job
On the one hand, there are many reasons why assigning parents to teach their children to be the good members of the society is supported by some people. Firstly, most of the children mimic their parents’ activities and thus parents have a greater role in setting good examples for their kids. For example, parents who regularly argue with others may find that their child both imitate them and consider this bad practice as an ideal life tactic to solve a disagreement. Secondly, parents are more close to children and they can teach their kids the important aspects of being a good member of the society. For instance, parents may teach their children and guide them to assist poor people by providing the food prepared by their parents.
On the other hand, other people, myself included, totally agree that school is the right place to learn how to be good members of the society. One of the reasons why this view is held is that nowadays children are not having sufficient time to spend with their parents because both of the parents might be employed or they may keep their child in a hostel. Actually, in school children will learn the education - hence the school must also include these qualities as a part of course structure so that the child may follow them. Besides, the school also allows children to communicate with people from all walks of life, ranging from their peers to dustmen or healthcare workers, from which there is a fair chance that children will learn to behave with different types of people in an appropriate way.
All things considered, while parents are important to the character formation of their offspring, in my mind, the school’s roles are much more significant.
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