Phân tích essay"An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh hướng dẫn thêm cách phân tích cũng như bài sửa kĩ càng của học sinh IELTS TUTOR đã đi thi ngày 22/8 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích bài essay về "brain drain" An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Từ vựng topic brain drain

Từ vựng topic "Brain drain" IELTS mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn

II. Phân tích bài essay về "brain drain" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

1. Đề bài

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

2. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng bài này là dạng 2 questions thì dạng này IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn quá nhiều lần rồi nhé:
    • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi What problems does this cause ?
      • Main idea 1: One of the major problems caused by such brain-drain is the shortage of skilled professionals which makes it difficult for poor countries to achieve economic development and improve the living standards of their poor people.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  từ vựng & cấu trúc thường dùng dạng cause - effect
        • Supporting idea: Due to lack of skilled professionals such as doctors and teachers, the citizens of these countries may struggle to get basic facilities such as medical services and education. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Because of such migration of professionals, poor countries depend on foreign technical aid which costs them billions of dollars and further aggravates their economic instability issues  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Poor economic conditions will exacerbate poverty, lead to unemployment and ultimately disintegrate the nation.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
      • Main idea 1: The government can offer better salaries along with incentives to skilled professionals to entice them to live and work in their country (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the government should make the salary of professionals equivalent to what is being paid in developed countries)
        • Supporting idea:  People who perform well in their respective fields of study should be honoured with awards and incentives  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "meanwhile" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The government should reward the deserving candidates with scholarships and increase facilities for research-oriented activities
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: Nowadays, schools in Vietnam are adopting latest technology similar to other developed countries
  • IELTS TUTOR lưu ý là 2 solutions sẽ tương ứng với 2 causes nhé!

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