Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people believe that the most important things in life are free - they could not be bought because they are invaluable. How far do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Many people believe that the most important things in life are free - they could not be bought because they are invaluable. How far do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: The most important things in life are often intangible and cannot be bought with money, such as love, happiness, health, and relationships.
- Supporting idea: These things are priceless and cannot be measured by material possessions or wealth. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "material" tiếng anh
- Example:
- A person who is wealthy can buy expensive gifts for their loved ones, but if they do not give them the time and attention they need, the relationship will suffer. On the other hand, someone who does not have a lot of money can still show their love by being present, listening, and supporting their loved ones.
- A person who has everything they want in terms of material possessions may still feel unhappy if they are not satisfied with their life. On the other hand, someone who has very little in terms of material possessions may still feel happy if they have a sense of purpose and meaning in their life.
- A wealthy person who eats unhealthy food, does not exercise, and ignores their health issues is unlikely to enjoy good health. On the other hand, someone who takes care of their health by making healthy choices is more likely to enjoy a long and fulfilling life.
- A person who has a lot of money may be able to buy a large house and expensive cars, but if they do not have anyone to share these things with, they may feel lonely and unfulfilled. On the other hand, someone who has strong relationships with friends and family may not have a lot of material possessions, but they will feel happy and supported.
- Main idea: The most important things in life are often intangible and cannot be bought with money, such as love, happiness, health, and relationships.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
- Main idea: Money can certainly make life easier, but it cannot buy true happiness, love, or fulfillment which are beyond the realm of monetary value.
- Supporting idea:
- These things must be earned through personal growth, positive relationships, and meaningful experiences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"relationship"tiếng anh
- They are the things that truly matter and bring us lasting happiness and fulfillment.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Money can certainly make life easier, but it cannot buy true happiness, love, or fulfillment which are beyond the realm of monetary value.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
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