PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"If a five-year-old commits a crime, should the parents be held responsible or punished? What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ "If a five-year-old commits a crime, should the parents be held responsible or punished? What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility?" từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

I. Đề bài

If a five-year-old commits a crime, should the parents be held responsible or punished? What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility?

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn TỪ VỰNG & IDEAS TOPIC CRIME IELTS

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 If a five-year-old commits a crime, should the parents be held responsible or punished? - Yes 
    • Main idea 1: Adults are the first teachers of the little kids, so once the kids do anything inappropriate, parents have to solve the problems. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng & idea topic "Solving problem" IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: disruptive children mostly come from violent families >> Parents therefore should always keep in mind that they have to provide a model for children to imitate
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Parents have to shoulder the responsibilities to play a vital role as their children’s supervisors 
      • Supporting idea: Children are curious about everything and quick to learn at that stage. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "stage" tiếng anh  
      • Example: TV and gaming, for example sometimes contain the questionable contents that would mislead children, so parents have to prevent them from watching these programmes.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What is the age of the child do you think parents should not take the responsibility? - 18 
    • Main idea: The commonly accepted age 18 probably applies to most people. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "apply" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:  It is an age when we are fully developed intellectually, mentally and, hopefully, psychologically >> We are supposed to be sensible enough to consider the consequences of our own behavior.
    • Example: 

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