Giải đề"In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to live alone or in small family units rather than large and extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 9/3/2024)

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In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to live alone. or in small family units rather than large and extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng POSITIVE > NEGATIVE thì có thể tham khảo bố cục: 

• BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao POSITIVE > NEGATIVE
  • Main idea 1: People who choose to live alone or in small family units may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members (lead an independent life). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "CHOOSE" IELTS 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • When they live alone, they have to learn to cook, wash and manage their finances independently.
      • If they live with their parents, they receive help all the time, and this may prevent them from acquiring important life skills and becoming independent. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
    • Example: Recent college graduate Sarah's decision to move into a shared apartment with a friend compels her to navigate challenges such as grocery shopping, meal preparation, and bill-splitting, ultimately leading to the development of crucial life skills and fostering a sense of independence that might not have been cultivated living with her parents. 
• BODY 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao POSITIVE > NEGATIVE
  • Main idea 2:  The trend towards living alone  will result in greater demand for housing 
    • Supporting idea: This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents  and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners  to buy their products or services. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "buy" tiếng anh
    • Example:  A study published in the Journal of Urban Economics (2020) found a positive correlation between the rise of single-person households and an increased need for new housing construction. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In modern societies, there has been a noticeable shift as more people in metropolitan areas prefer to live alone or within small-scale households (những hộ gia đình quy mô nhỏ – households consisting of only one or two people) rather than in extended family groups. I firmly believe this trend is largely positive, despite some minor drawbacks.

One major advantage is that individuals who opt to live independently or in nuclear families tend to become more self-reliant (tự lực – able to depend on oneself without external help). When living alone, people are compelled to acquire essential life skills such as cooking, cleaning, and financial management, which may otherwise be neglected if they constantly rely on family members. For instance, a recent college graduate who relocates to a shared apartment is obliged to handle tasks like bill-splitting and meal preparation, thereby cultivating both practical competence and a greater sense of autonomy. By contrast, those who remain in multigenerational households may risk being overly dependent on relatives, which can hinder (cản trở – to prevent or slow progress) their personal growth.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Another noteworthy (đáng chú ý – deserving attention or notice) benefit is the positive economic implications of this lifestyle shift. The growing number of single-person or two-person households drives up housing demand, thereby stimulating industries such as real estate, construction, and interior design. According to a study in the Journal of Urban Economics (2020), there is a strong link between the surge in single-occupancy living arrangements and the increased need for new housing projects. This heightened demand not only creates job opportunities but also boosts consumer spending in various sectors, ranging from household appliances to utility services.

In conclusion, while some may argue that smaller households weaken traditional family ties, the advantages of fostering independence and stimulating economic growth make this trend overwhelmingly positive.

New Vocabulary List

1. small-scale households = những hộ gia đình quy mô nhỏ – households consisting of one or two people.

   • Synonyms: nuclear families, compact households, reduced households

   • Antonyms: extended families, large households, multigenerational families

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "more people in metropolitan areas prefer to live alone or within small-scale households."

2. self-reliant = tự lực – able to depend on oneself without help.

   • Synonyms: independent, autonomous, self-sufficient

   • Antonyms: dependent, reliant, helpless

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "individuals who opt to live independently or in nuclear families tend to become more self-reliant."

3. hinder = cản trở – to prevent or slow progress.

   • Synonyms: obstruct, impede, hamper

   • Antonyms: facilitate, promote, encourage

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "those who remain in multigenerational households may risk being overly dependent, which can hinder their personal growth."

4. noteworthy = đáng chú ý – deserving attention or notice.

   • Synonyms: remarkable, significant, notable

   • Antonyms: insignificant, trivial, unremarkable

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Another noteworthy benefit is the positive economic implications."

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. "When living alone, people are compelled to acquire essential life skills…"

   • Structure: Reduced adverbial clause ("When they live alone → When living alone").

   • Vietnamese: "Khi sống một mình, mọi người buộc phải học các kỹ năng sống thiết yếu…"

2. "By contrast, those who remain in multigenerational households may risk being overly dependent…"

   • Structure: Contrastive linking phrase "By contrast" to emphasize comparison.

   • Vietnamese: "Trái lại, những người vẫn ở trong gia đình nhiều thế hệ có thể sẽ quá phụ thuộc…"

3. "According to a study…, there is a strong link between the surge in single-occupancy living arrangements and the increased need for new housing projects."

   • Structure: Complex sentence with there is a strong link between A and B (academic phrasing).

   • Vietnamese: "Theo một nghiên cứu…, có mối liên hệ chặt chẽ giữa sự gia tăng các hộ sống một mình và nhu cầu gia tăng đối với các dự án nhà ở mới."

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