PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ "In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?" từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

I. Đề bài

In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic "Family" IELTS

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • nuclear family & extended family: gia đình hạt nhân & gia đình nhiều thế hệ
  • breadwinner: trụ cột
  • shoulder the financial burden: gánh vác gánh nặng tài chính
  • share household chores / household duties: chia sẻ công việc nhà. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "share" tiếng anh
  • child-rearing: nuôi dạy con cái
  • change = transform = shift
  • occur = take place
  • Single-earner family: gia đình chỉ có một trụ cột
  • Spouse: người chồng hoặc vợ
  • A stay-at-home parent: bố hoặc mẹ ở nhà để chăm sóc con cái và làm việc nhà
  • At liberty to do sth: có thể tự do làm gì đó. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt giới từ "at, in, on" khi mô tả nơi chốn

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Body 1: What are the changes occurring?
    • Main idea 1: (Changes in family structure)  Extended families, which were prominent in previous decades, are rapidly replaced with nuclear families. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase danh từ "change" tiếng anh  
      • Supporting idea: While more often than not different generations shared one roof in the past, the majority of family households in today’s society consist of parents and their offspring.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Changes in family roles) The notion that women’s role is to stay at home and take care of their families have gradually disappeared; instead, there is an increasing number of women becoming working mothers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "instead" & "instead of" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Women build their own career and are less dependent on their husbands, who used to be considered the breadwinners
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Positive 
    • Main idea 1: (Changes in family structure)  if fewer generations reside together, people seem to have more freedom and privacy to do anything they have interest in without disturbing other members. 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: In extended families juveniles love pop music might have to stop listening to it because their grandparents could find it annoying and noisy. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng Topic Music IELTS 
    • Main idea 2: (Changes in family roles) Women can follow their dream and stabilize her family financial status if they are better at work than their husbands.
      • Supporting idea: That both parents can become the breadwinners would ensure the stable finance of a family, which not only directly eases the burden that the father have to bear in order to support the whole family but also enables the mother to pursue her dream job. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "ensure" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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