Phân tích "In the past, people used to travel to see the difference from their home country. Now the difference among the countries is less evident, what is the cause of this similarity? Do you think that the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In the past, people used to travel to see the difference from their home country. Now the difference among the countries is less evident, what is the cause of this similarity? Do you think that the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In the past, people used to travel to see the difference from their home country. Now the difference among the countries is less evident, what is the cause of this similarity? Do you think that the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: The interconnectedness of economies, trade, and communication has led to the exchange and blending of ideas, products, and cultural influences. 
        • Supporting idea: This has contributed to a certain level of homogenization in terms of lifestyles, fashion, and consumer preferences. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng IN TERMS OF trong tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
          • Fast food chains, such as McDonald's and KFC, have spread to all corners of the globe. This has led to the introduction of new foods and flavors to people in different cultures. It has also led to the adaptation of these foods to local tastes. 
          • Global brands, such as Coca-Cola and Nike, are known and used by people all over the world. This has led to the spread of Western culture to different cultures. For example, Coca-Cola is often seen as a symbol of American culture.
      • Main idea 2: The growth of international tourism and the widespread availability of media platforms have exposed people to different cultures and destinations. 
        • Supporting idea: As a result, there is increased awareness and accessibility to various lifestyles, leading to a perception of similarity among countries.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: disadvantages > advantages
      • Main idea 1: The convergence of cultures may lead to the loss of unique cultural identities and traditions, potentially resulting in a more homogenized global culture.
        • Supporting idea:
          • When cultures come into contact and interact, there is a tendency for certain aspects of one culture to be adopted or assimilated by another. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "aspect" tiếng anh 
          • Over time, this can lead to the erosion or dilution of distinctive cultural practices, as they are gradually replaced by more widely accepted or popular elements from other cultures.
        • Example: For example, in many parts of Africa, traditional clothing is now rarely worn, as people have adopted Western-style clothing.
      • Main idea 2: With fewer evident differences, travelers may miss out on the opportunity to immerse themselves in truly distinct cultural experiences.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When destinations become more similar, travelers may encounter a more standardized or commercialized version of culture that caters to mass tourism. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng ngoại động từ "encounter" tiếng anh 
          • This can result in superficial interactions and experiences that do not fully capture the depth and uniqueness of a particular culture.
        • Example: For example, a tourist visiting a city in China that has a large number of Western-style restaurants and shops may not realize that there are still many traditional Chinese restaurants and shops in the city. The tourist may also miss out on the opportunity to experience traditional Chinese culture, such as visiting temples or participating in festivals.
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