Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important.
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về hard work) This quality ensures people pay attention to their work and pursue their passions without giving up, and hence they are more likely to gain their own success.
      • Supporting idea: Despite the number of failures we have to face in life, there are still possibilities of success once we are consistent in accomplishing our goals.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về luck) luck plays a pivotal role in defining the success of people
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm good planning is the key factor to success in life & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: planning skills enable people to achieve their goals (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: good planning offers individuals clear goals)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They would plan out specific steps to follow so as to fulfill singular aims and then see the bigger picture of the procedure.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: wise planning can help people to identify exactly which direction they should follow in the future)
        • Arrangement in advance provides us more opportunities to look forward and examine the benefits and drawbacks of each goal that we set, thereby reducing the risks involved and increasing the chances of success. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "THEREBY"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: planning allows people to make timely adjustments in the future. 
      • Supporting idea: They could predict foreseeable scenarios, and thus they are more likely to minimize potential risks and take advantage of opportunities to thrive in their career paths.
      • Example: if one desires to open a coffee shop, by planning the financial stages as well as economic knowledge and competency beforehand, he can decide on the scale of his business and predict future interest generated from the business. Therefore, there are high chances that he will be successful. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh

Many argue that hard work and luck are the driving forces behind achievement, while others believe that good planning (kế hoạch bài bản – well-structured preparation) is the most decisive factor. I firmly side with the latter view because a clear roadmap often determines whether ambition can successfully translate into reality.

On the one hand, hard work and luck undeniably contribute to personal success. Those who demonstrate unwavering diligence (sự siêng năng kiên định – persistent hard work) tend to stay focused on their long-term pursuits, pushing through repeated failures until they reach their targets. This relentless commitment (sự cống hiến bền bỉ – tireless dedication) increases their likelihood of rising above setbacks. In addition, fortuitous circumstances (tình huống may mắn – unexpected luck) may open doors that effort alone cannot, such as meeting influential individuals or encountering unexpected opportunities. For instance, many entrepreneurs attribute part of their breakthroughs to being at the right place at the right time.

On the other hand, I believe that systematic planning plays a more fundamental role because it provides individuals with clear and achievable goals. With meticulous foresight (tầm nhìn cẩn trọng – careful anticipation), people can map out step-by-step strategies to accomplish specific objectives, thereby (do đó – as a result) reducing risks and maximizing productivity. Good planning also enables timely adjustments; when individuals anticipate foreseeable contingencies (tình huống có thể dự đoán – predictable situations), they are able to adapt swiftly and seize emerging opportunities. For example, someone preparing to open a café who outlines finances, market trends, and required skills in advance can determine the appropriate scale of investment and predict future revenue, greatly increasing the chance of long-term success.

In conclusion, although hard work and luck have undeniable value, I firmly believe that thoughtful and strategic planning is the most crucial driver of success.

New Vocabulary

1. good planning – kế hoạch bài bản – well-structured preparation

Synonyms: strategic planning, organized preparation, systematic arrangement
Antonyms: improvisation, randomness, disorganization
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Good planning provides individuals with clear and achievable goals.

2. unwavering diligence – sự siêng năng kiên định – persistent hard work

Synonyms: steadfast effort, perseverance, industriousness
Antonyms: laziness, inconsistency, idleness
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Those who demonstrate unwavering diligence tend to stay focused.

3. relentless commitment – sự cống hiến bền bỉ – tireless dedication

Synonyms: unremitting effort, devotion, persistence
Antonyms: apathy, indifference, negligence
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: This relentless commitment increases their likelihood of rising above setbacks.

4. fortuitous circumstances – tình huống may mắn – unexpected luck

Synonyms: serendipity, chance events, good fortune
Antonyms: misfortune, adversity, bad luck
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Fortuitous circumstances may open doors that effort alone cannot.

5. meticulous foresight – tầm nhìn cẩn trọng – careful anticipation

Synonyms: prudence, careful planning, foresightedness
Antonyms: short-sightedness, carelessness, impulsiveness
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: With meticulous foresight, people can map out step-by-step strategies.

6. foreseeable contingencies – tình huống có thể dự đoán – predictable situations

Synonyms: anticipated scenarios, expected events, predictable outcomes
Antonyms: surprises, unpredictability, uncertainty
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Individuals who anticipate foreseeable contingencies are able to adapt swiftly.

7. thereby – do đó – as a result

Synonyms: thus, hence, consequently
Antonyms: however, nevertheless, on the contrary
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …step-by-step strategies, thereby reducing risks…

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