Phân tích "Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/8/2022)

· Task 2,Đề thi IELTS thật

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important.
      • Main idea 1: (Viết về hard work) This quality ensures people pay attention to their work and pursue their passions without giving up, and hence they are more likely to gain their own success.
        • Supporting idea: Despite the number of failures we have to face in life, there are still possibilities of success once we are consistent in accomplishing our goals.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: (Viết về luck) luck plays a pivotal role in defining the success of people
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm good planning is the key factor to success in life & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: planning skills enable people to achieve their goals (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: good planning offers individuals clear goals)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They would plan out specific steps to follow so as to fulfill singular aims and then see the bigger picture of the procedure.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: wise planning can help people to identify exactly which direction they should follow in the future)
          • Arrangement in advance provides us more opportunities to look forward and examine the benefits and drawbacks of each goal that we set, thereby reducing the risks involved and increasing the chances of success. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "THEREBY"
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: planning allows people to make timely adjustments in the future
        • Supporting idea: They could predict foreseeable scenarios, and thus they are more likely to minimize potential risks and take advantage of opportunities to thrive in their career paths.
        • Example: if one desires to open a coffee shop, by planning the financial stages as well as economic knowledge and competency beforehand, he can decide on the scale of his business and predict future interest generated from the business. Therefore, there are high chances that he will be successful. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh

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