Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: when married couples are regular employees, sharing household duties reduces the burden of housework on one person. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • This is because home chores can be completed in less time when two people are performing their duties. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE "BECAUSE" TIẾNG ANH
        • As a result, they can calmly complete their household work and can reach the workplace on time. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, a recent study by Cambridge University found that families in which both partners are working full-time and sharing housework had less chaos in the morning and reached at work on time. However, opponents say that performing home duties is the responsibility of women >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "however" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: the families in which both husband and wife are working have lesser conflict when they both help each other doing household work.
      • Supporting idea:
        • When both husband and wife contribute to household work, no one raises complaints that one is doing more work as compared to another. 
        • This leads to having a happy family and a prosperous life.
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In many modern societies, women engage in full-time employment just as frequently as men, leading many to argue that household tasks should be shared equally between partners. I totally agree with this viewpoint because equal participation in domestic duties can both reduce stress and strengthen family harmony.

The first reason I support this idea is that dividing housework can significantly ease the daily burden on each spouse. When both partners are equally engaged (tham gia tích cực – actively involved) in domestic tasks, chores are completed more quickly, preventing one individual from being overwhelmed. This is largely because shared responsibilities allow couples to finish tasks in a more streamlined (được sắp xếp hợp lý – efficiently organised) and time-saving manner. As a result, they can begin their day without unnecessary tension and arrive at work punctually. For instance, a recent study conducted by Cambridge University revealed that dual-income families who adopt a fairly distributed (phân bổ công bằng – allocated evenly) division of chores experience less morning chaos and enjoy smoother daily routines.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

The second reason for my agreement is that equal involvement in housework helps create a more harmonious family environment. When husbands and wives jointly shoulder (gánh vác chung – share the responsibility for) domestic duties, neither partner feels exploited or unfairly treated. This prevents resentment from building up and promotes a sense of mutual respect, which is essential for long-term marital stability. Consequently, families are more likely to enjoy emotionally nurturing (nuôi dưỡng cảm xúc – providing emotional support) relationships and lead conflict-free lives. A survey in South Korea, for example, found that couples who share chores report significantly fewer arguments, especially about fairness and workload.

In conclusion, I completely agree that men and women should share household duties equally because this practice lightens workload pressures and enhances family well-being.

NEW VOCABULARY 

1. engaged (tham gia tích cực – actively involved)

Synonyms: involved, committed, occupied
Antonyms: detached, indifferent, disengaged
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: When both partners are equally engaged in domestic tasks…

2. streamlined (được sắp xếp hợp lý – efficiently organised)

Synonyms: efficient, optimized, systematized
Antonyms: disordered, inefficient, chaotic
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …finish tasks in a more streamlined and time-saving manner.

3. distributed (phân bổ công bằng – allocated evenly)

Synonyms: allocated, apportioned, shared
Antonyms: concentrated, withheld, monopolised>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …families who adopt a fairly distributed division of chores…

4. shoulder (gánh vác – share the responsibility)

Synonyms: bear, undertake, handle
Antonyms: avoid, neglect, evade
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: When husbands and wives jointly shoulder domestic duties…

5. nurturing (nuôi dưỡng cảm xúc – providing emotional support)

Synonyms: supportive, caring, fostering
Antonyms: hostile, neglectful, indifferent
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …enjoy emotionally nurturing relationships…

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