Giải đề"Many people use social media to get in touch with other people and know about news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt overall 7.5)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Many people use social media to get in touch with other people and know about news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Many people use social media to get in touch with other people and know about news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• social media = social networking sites = online media = online platforms = social networks = social technologies 
• virtual conversational exchanges = online communication = interact online
• advantages = benefits
• disadvantages = drawbacks = setbacks. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "outweigh", "advantage" & "disadvantage"
• is replacing = a substitute 
• interaction = communication

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• To infiltrate into something: Thâm nhập vào đâu đó/cái gì đó
• To facilitate communication: Thúc đẩy sự giao tiếp
• To globally connect with somebody: Kết nối toàn cầu với ai
• make it much easier for somebody to do something: trở nên dễ dàng cho ai đó làm gì
• keep in contact with somebody = keep in touch with somebody: giữ liên lạc với ai
• loved ones: những người thân yêu
• regardless of …: không thể tới …
• on a daily basis: hàng ngày
• a powerful tool: một công cụ mạnh mẽ, quyền lực
• newly-released products: các sản phẩm mới được tung ra thị trường
• a great deal of = a lot of: nhiều
• do more harm than good: hại nhiều hơn lợi
• the overuse of …: việc sử dụng cái gì quá mức. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng giới từ tiếng Anh (Prepositions)
• to be addicted to …: nghiện cái gì
• prevalence: sự phổ biến
• to keep in touch: giữ liên lạc
• beloved ones: những người thân yêu
• regardless of: bất chấp, bất kể
• to keep sb updated with: cập nhật tình hình
• a myriad of sth: vô số
• to downplay: hạ xuống, hạ bệ
• to prevent sb from sth: ngăn ai khỏi làm gì
• be of great significance: có ý nghĩa lớn, rất quan trọng
• to impede cản trở
• reliance on sth: sự dựa dẫm vào
• to get into the habit of sth: có thói quen
• abbreviation: viết tắt
• slang: tiếng lóng
• to adversely affect: ảnh hưởng xấu
• unprecedented convenience : sự tiện lợi chưa từng thấy
• pay attention to …: chú ý tới …
• abbreviated words: các từ viết tắt
• have a habit of …: có thói quen làm gì
• To share common interests: Có những mối quan tâm giống nhau
• Live streaming service: Dịch vụ live stream
• To have access to something: Có thể tiếp cận tới cái gì
• To fall prey to online communication abuse: Trở thành nạn nhân của sự lạm dụng giao tiếp trên mạng (tạm dịch)
• Online bullying and harassment: Sự quấy rối và bắt nạn trên mạng. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "bully" tiếng anh
• A toxic environment: Một môi trường độc hại
• To be verbally assaulted: Bị tấn công bằng lời nói
• Hateful or abusive contents: Những nội dung cay động
• Reclusive users: Những người dùng không thích sự giao thiệp thực tế (tạm dịch)
• A virtual world: Một thế giới ảo
• To engage in real-life relationships: Tham gia vào những mối quan hệ thực tế
• Serious mental effects: Có ảnh hưởng nghiệm trọng đến sức khỏe tinh thần (tạm dịch)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: fall prey to online communication abuse (online bullying and harassment)
      • Supporting idea:These sites are becoming more and more dominant and attract large numbers of new users every day >> social networking websites can become a toxic environment where users can be verbally assaulted because there are only a few rules, most of which are spoken rules rather than established guidelines, that restrict hateful or abusive contents. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "restrict" tiếng anh
      • Example: Cassidy Jernigan was a 15-year-old girl from Texas who was cyberbullied on social media platforms like Facebook and Ask.fm. The bullying was relentless and included hateful messages, threats of violence, and the creation of fake profiles in Cassidy's name.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: downplay the importance of direct contact with other people in real life
      • Supporting idea: Nowadays, many young and reclusive users prefer living in a virtual world on social sites than engaging in real-life relationships. This may have serious mental effects, such as increased stress, anxiety and loneliness. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "anxiety" tiếng anh
      • Example: In a 2017 study, researchers at the University of California, San Diego found that people who use social media for more than two hours per day are twice as likely to report feeling lonely and isolated than those who use social media for less than 30 minutes per day.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: globally connect with old friends, relatives or with people who share common interests, study sessions are happening online (HOẶC: social networking sites have made it much easier for us to keep in contact with our loved ones, regardless of geographic location)
        • Supporting idea: Social media and communication tools facilitate global interactions, allowing people to stay in touch and share their lives, no matter the geographical distance.
        • Example: Facebook is currently providing service for 2.4 billion users who can choose to connect and interact with anyone they want, regardless of where they are (HOẶC: Students studying abroad, for example, can keep in touch with their families and friends on a daily basis using the video call features of Skype, Facebook or various other apps)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: social media make news available to the public sooner than any conventional media like newspapers 
        • Supporting idea: In the current scenario, anyone from any part of the world has access to live news online and does not have to depend on newspapers which cannot provide instant coverage of news
        • Example: During the 2011 earthquake in Japan, social media platforms like Twitter and Facebook played a crucial role as people swiftly shared photos, videos, and eyewitness accounts, offering the public real-time information about the unfolding disaster ahead of traditional news outlets.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: fall prey to online communication abuse (online bullying and harassment)
        • Supporting idea: These sites are becoming more and more dominant and attract large numbers of new users every day >> social networking websites can become a toxic environment where users can be verbally assaulted because there are only a few rules, most of which are spoken rules rather than established guidelines, that restrict hateful or abusive contents. >> IELTS  TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "hated" tiếng anh
        • Example: Cassidy Jernigan was a 15-year-old girl from Texas who was cyberbullied on social media platforms like Facebook and Ask.fm. The bullying was relentless and included hateful messages, threats of violence, and the creation of fake profiles in Cassidy's name.
      • Main idea 2: downplay the importance of direct contact with other people in real life
        • Supporting idea: Nowadays, many young and reclusive users prefer living in a virtual world on social sites than engaging in real-life relationships. This may have serious mental effects, such as increased stress, anxiety and loneliness.
        • Example: In a 2017 study, researchers at the University of California, San Diego found that people who use social media for more than two hours per day are twice as likely to report feeling lonely and isolated than those who use social media for less than 30 minutes per day.
    • Conclusion: paraphrase intro câu 2 

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