Phân tích & sửa đề"Many species and plants are declining in the world. What are the reasons? What are the effective measures to solve this problem? IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa đề"Many species and plants are declining in the world. What are the reasons? What are the effective measures to solve this problem? IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Many species and plants are declining in the world. What are the reasons? What are the effective measures to solve this problem?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What are the reasons? 
    • Main idea 1:  the clearing of forests for the development of civilization has resulted in the destruction of habitats for many animals and the depletion of their food supply  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "result" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Deforestation with no regards to the conservation of unique plant species has resulted in the extinction of many of them
        • Huge swathes of trees have been cleared to construct cities, collect raw material for various industries, and build factories and dams
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:  climate change
      • Supporting idea: With the rise in the earth's temperature due to an increase in carbon emissions, numerous plants and animals are unable to adapt to their new environmental conditions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "adapt"
      • Example: a subtle rise in sea water temperature can destroy planktons which are the primary food source of certain sea creatures  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: global warming has led to an increase in the Earth’s temperature at a few places and fall at other places, so animals such as the polar bear and snow leopard are endangered species on the verge of extinction)
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What are the effective measures to solve this problem?
    • Main idea 1:  the government and responsible authorities should regulate the clearing of land, and promote reforestation
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: the government should undertake efforts to stop global warming 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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