PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?​"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

I. Đề bài

More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Personal possessions reflect wealth, social status, and appearance: Tài sản cá nhân phản ánh sự giàu sang, địa vị xã hội, và bề ngoài
  • Enhance people’s appearance: Làm đẹp vẻ bề ngoài
  • Globally recognized: Được công nhận toàn cầu
  • Branded merchandise: Sản phẩm có thương hiệu
  • Inclination towards: Xu hướng nghiên về
  • Stem from: Bắt nguồn từ. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "towards" tiếng anh
  • Social acceptance: Sự công nhận của xã hội
  • Dominance: Sự thống trị
  • Obliterate: Hủy diệt
  • Mogul: Nhân vật có sức ảnh hưởng lớn ở một lĩnh vực.
  • Luxurious brands: Nhãn hàng xa xỉ
  • To be sold at exorbitant prices: Được bán với giá rất cao
  • Opine: old and state as one’s opinion.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • “Albert Einstein is a genius,” he opined.

  • Disparity: a difference in level or treatment, especially one that is seen as unfair.
  • Counterfeit: a fraudulent imitation of something else.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • He was aware of the presence of counterfeit notes in the burglary.

  • Exorbitant: (of a price or amount charged) unreasonably high.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • Some cell services charge exorbitant rates for international calls.

  • Apt: appropriate or suitable in the circumstances.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • The theme for the summer rendezvous could not be more apt.

  • Impoverished: made poor, deprived of strength or vitality.
  • Lucrative: producing a great deal of profit.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • He has a lucrative career as a fintech consultant.

  • Destitute: extremely poor and lacking the means to provide for oneself.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • “Food for All” is a charity that cares for destitute children and women.

  • Conflict: a serious disagreement or argument, typically a protracted one.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • The eternal conflict between the two countries is saddening.

  • Ubiquitous: present, appearing, or found everywhere.
    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
      • His ubiquitous presence is still felt through his books and poetry.

  • Show off their social status or their wealth: Khoe địa vị xã hội hay sự giàu có. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "poverty" "The gap between rich and poor" IELTS
  • The strongest economic superpower: Cường cuốc kinh tế mạnh nhất
  • Dominant brand names: Nhãn hàng thịnh hành
  • Maintain their positions: Giữ vững vị thế
  • Prevent large-scale monopoly: Ngăn cản thế độc quyền theo quy mô lớn

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • BODY 1: Trả lời câu hỏi What are the reasons? 
    • Main idea 1: the tendency of using large brand products mostly stems from people’s beliefs on personal possessions reflecting wealth, social status, and appearance (HOẶC: The inclination towards famous brand names also stems from the desire for social acceptance). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "tendency" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: these items are often considered as a tool for the rich to show off their social status or their wealth >> To show off their social status and have a good impression on others.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: many people associate clothes and accessories from popular brand names such as Nike or Adidas with high quality and fashionable designs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
  • BODY 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Do you think it is a positive or negative development? - NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea 1: This might cause various social problems related to the rich and the poor (Widen the gap between the rich and the poor)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As impoverished people are rarely provided with lucrative jobs, they might find it extremely challenging to make their ends meet, not to mention buying things from luxurious brands >< he wealthy are eligible to not only accommodate their lives with fundamental necessities but also afford expensive goods that could bring them happiness. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý hướng dẫn từ a đến z cách dùng từ "make" trong ielts writing
        • This discrepancy between rich people and the destitute could result in tension and conflicts within a society.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: People tend to judge others by their appearance
      • Supporting idea: People tend to live a more material-oriented life; are more inclined towards a materialistic life (HOẶC: Develop materialism in society). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "tend" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

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