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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees.

Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• To place significant emphasis on … = focus on
• Be attributable to … = caused by. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
• Be overwhelmingly negative = greatly negative
• At large = as a whole
• preferential treatment = favor s.t
• to have its root in … = result from …
• across a wide variety of industries = across many businesses, fields
• to accumulate relevant expertise = learn relevant knowledge in the field
• to some degree = to a certain extent
• on-the-job training = training to do the job
• to act as proof for … = prove …
• to minimize the time and associated costs = reduce the time and costs needed
• to pale in comparison to s.t = not as important as s.t
• adverse impacts = negative effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh
• people from less privileged segments of society = poor people
• families with low income levels
• to put s.o at a distinct disadvantage = become a disadvantage for s.o
• internationally-recognized qualifications = degrees that are recognized worldwide
• coupled with this is … = in addition, …
• to forge official qualifications = illegally create fake degrees
• to interfere with equal opportunity in the current job market
• to provoke public uproar = make people angry
• job seekers = people who find jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "find" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Reasons:
  • Academic qualifications are often a reliable proof of one’s ability
  • Some jobs such as researchers and professors require a high level of academic knowledge, which is often reflected by qualifications. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
  • The act of choosing an employee based on their qualifications may save a great amount of time for recruiters, while personal qualities can only be demonstrated if a candidate comes to an interview or work as trainee
• Positive/ negative: negative
  • Qualifications given by some schools are unreliable. 
  • Some recruiters may overlook applications of potential workers who may not have high qualifications. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "Work" IELTS

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi Why is it the case? 
  • Main idea 1: They believe that candidates with an academic qualification are equipped with in-depth knowledge and useful skills which are necessary for their future jobs. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt "believe" & "trust" tiếng anh  
    • Supporting idea: These people could make greater contributions to their company than those without any formal qualifications >> This to some degree helps minimize time and costs involved in either employment or further training.
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: University degrees in general can act as proof for academic levels as well as competence of an average person 
    • Supporting idea: A student has to devote a lot of time and effort to his or her study in order to get a university qualification, which can somehow prove that this student is a hard-working and persevering person. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "preserve"
    • Example: A candidate has to acquire a great deal of medical knowledge at university as well as spend a lot of time to practice and carry out experiments.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi Is it a positive or negative development? - negative 
  • Main idea 1: (Viết liên quan đến life experience) Those with various degrees still face difficulties dealing with their clients because of a lack of necessary skills and experience (HOẶC:  Life experience helps people to deal with difficult situations more effectively, which helps improve work productivity). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: After a long time of working in a real work environment, people are also capable of doing most assigned tasks without a formal academic education.
    • Example: Steve Jobs was the most successful person in the technology industry without holding any formal education in this field.
  • Main idea 2: (Viết liên quan đến personal qualities) Negative personalities such as dishonesty in the workplace, for example, could pose a serious threat to the development of any companies. 
    • Supporting idea: in Vietnam, some people are willing to pay a huge amount of money for illegal degrees and diplomas so that they can apply for well-paid jobs in large firms. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ CRIME tiếng anh
    • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In today’s competitive job market, many employers tend to prioritize formal academic qualifications over life experience and personal attributes. This trend stems from the belief that academic credentials reflect a candidate’s intellectual capabilities and readiness for specific job roles.

One key reason why employers favour formal education is because graduates are perceived to be equipped with in-depth knowledge (deep and thorough understanding – kiến thức chuyên sâu) and job-specific skills (practical abilities tailored to a certain profession – kỹ năng chuyên môn), which are considered essential for fulfilling their roles effectively. These individuals can make meaningful contributions (add significant value – đóng góp có ý nghĩa) to the company without requiring excessive training, thereby reducing onboarding costs (expenses related to hiring and training new employees – chi phí tuyển dụng và đào tạo). For example, medical students must master a wide range of theoretical knowledge and undergo rigorous hands-on training (practical experience – đào tạo thực hành) to become competent professionals. Moreover, academic degrees often serve as proof of perseverance (evidence of one’s ability to work hard persistently – bằng chứng cho sự kiên trì), as obtaining a degree demands consistent effort and dedication.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

However, this growing emphasis on academic credentials can be viewed as a negative development (a harmful or undesirable trend – xu hướng tiêu cực). While degrees reflect academic achievement, they do not necessarily guarantee real-world effectiveness. Employees with substantial real-world experience (practical knowledge gained through working – kinh nghiệm thực tế) often outperform graduates in handling unpredictable situations and client-related challenges. For instance, Steve Jobs revolutionized the tech industry despite lacking formal education in his field. Furthermore, overlooking personal traits can backfire. Negative qualities such as workplace dishonesty (lack of integrity in a professional setting – sự thiếu trung thực nơi làm việc) can harm a company’s reputation. In countries like Vietnam, individuals sometimes purchase counterfeit diplomas (fake academic qualifications – bằng cấp giả) to secure prestigious jobs, which undermines trust in the recruitment process.

In conclusion, while formal qualifications offer certain advantages, placing excessive emphasis on them can lead to undesirable outcomes for businesses and society.

📙 Example Word Analysis

1. In-depth knowledge
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Graduates are perceived to be equipped with in-depth knowledge.
   Synonyms: extensive understanding, thorough insight, comprehensive grasp
   Antonyms: shallow understanding, surface knowledge, limited awareness

2. Real-world experience
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Employees with substantial real-world experience often outperform graduates.
   Synonyms: practical experience, on-the-job learning, workplace exposure
   Antonyms: theoretical knowledge, academic study, classroom learning

3. Counterfeit diplomas
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Some individuals purchase counterfeit diplomas to secure prestigious jobs.
   Synonyms: fake certificates, bogus degrees, forged qualifications
   Antonyms: authentic degrees, verified diplomas, genuine certifications

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