Phân tích"Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 6/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng negative):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: since most adolescents are malleable, bad examples from celebrities can develop moral issues in them   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "developing"
    • Supporting idea:
      • Adolescents often look up to celebrities as role models. 
      • When these figures engage in morally questionable behavior, such as substance abuse or reckless behavior, adolescents may perceive these actions as acceptable or even desirable.
    • Example: 
      • Many teenagers who look up to Hollywood figures such as Paris Hilton believe that they should pursue a glamorous, material life with parties and nightclubs  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "follow" tiếng anh
      • Other celebrities like Kim Kardashian present a wrong message to the young generation, suggesting that using scandals and PR stunts are the most effective methods to gain attention and be successful.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: such reverence for celebrities in the field of entertainment would possibly cause a detriment to social security   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:
      • if their idols were criticized due to their scandals, they would try to sugar-coat the situation or even trigger arguments >> This would be really challenging for authorities to maintain security.
    • Example: A typical example of this is the chaos during and after Korean singers and musical bands’ show in Vietnam a few years ago when the crowd of fans went uncontrollable, which caused irritation for the locals and also danger to the fans themselves

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