Phân tích"The older generations tend to have very traditional idea about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 25/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The older generations tend to have very traditional idea about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (computer-based 24/4/2022).

The older generations tend to have very traditional idea about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are some conventional values which the youngsters should foster as those perspectives are still useful and beneficial in this contemporary era)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Values such as honesty, hard work, helping the needy are lessons taught to us by our forefathers and they need to be carried on.
        • Young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ SENSE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior"
        • Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: by following mores from the past, young people will have a foundation to judge their present and future actions. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "following" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Tradition serves as an increasingly important guide in a world with few fixed values. 
        • Without these customs to guide their behaviour, young people would be at the mercy of the values espoused in popular media. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "custom" tiếng anh
        • As the world has become more secular, religious values have declined but cultural traditions remain intact. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Word form của "remain"
      • Example:
        • A standout example of this would be the strong familial ties in Asian nations such as Japan, Korea, China, and Vietnam where children in these nations are expected to listen to the advice of their parents, maintain cultural traditions, and behave within certain ethical bounds.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, there has been an ongoing debate over whether the traditional beliefs of the older generations are still relevant in preparing young people for modern society. I totally disagree with the view that such ideas are outdated, as they still provide valuable moral foundations and social guidance in today’s world.

To begin with, some conventional values (adj: based on accepted traditions and customs – theo phong tục, truyền thống) are certainly applicable to the modern era. Lessons such as honesty (n: the quality of being truthful and sincere – tính trung thực), diligence (n: careful and persistent effort – sự siêng năng, cần cù), and compassion (n: concern for the suffering of others – lòng trắc ẩn), which were passed down from our ancestors, remain vital in shaping one’s character development (n: quá trình hình thành tính cách). For instance, older generations attach great importance to strong work ethics (n: nguyên tắc đạo đức nghề nghiệp vững chắc) and self-discipline (n: khả năng tự kiểm soát)—qualities that are indispensable for young people striving to succeed in today’s cutthroat job market (n: thị trường việc làm khốc liệt). Moreover, traditional manners such as politeness and respectful communication (n: cách giao tiếp lịch sự, tôn trọng) are increasingly necessary in our multicultural societies (n: xã hội đa văn hóa) where individuals must interact harmoniously with people from diverse backgrounds.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Furthermore, adherence to traditional principles enables young generations to form a stable moral compass (n: kim chỉ nam đạo đức) in an era of rapid change. Tradition acts as an anchor of stability (n: điểm tựa ổn định) in a world where ethical values are often blurred by materialistic pursuits (n: theo đuổi vật chất) and social media influences. Without such customs to guide their conduct, the youth could easily fall prey to superficial or hedonistic lifestyles (adj: sống hưởng lạc, chỉ tìm khoái lạc). A clear illustration of this is found in Asian societies such as Japan or Vietnam, where filial piety (n: lòng hiếu thảo) and collective responsibility (n: tinh thần trách nhiệm tập thể) continue to shape moral behavior and preserve social cohesion (n: sự gắn kết xã hội) even in the face of modernization.

In conclusion, traditional values continue to play a pivotal role (adj: extremely important or influential – then chốt, quan trọng) in equipping younger generations with essential life skills and moral integrity. Rather than being obsolete, these timeless principles serve as the backbone of a well-functioning modern society.

🧠 New Vocabulary List

1. conventional values – based on accepted traditions and customs – giá trị truyền thống

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Some conventional values are certainly applicable to the modern era.

   • Synonyms: traditional values, customary beliefs, time-honored ideals

   • Antonyms: modern principles, progressive ideas, radical notions

2. honesty – the quality of being truthful and sincere – tính trung thực

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Lessons such as honesty, diligence, and compassion remain vital.

   • Synonyms: truthfulness, integrity, sincerity

   • Antonyms: dishonesty, deceit, fraudulence

3. diligence – careful and persistent effort – sự siêng năng

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Diligence remains vital in shaping one’s character development.

   • Synonyms: hard work, industriousness, perseverance

   • Antonyms: laziness, idleness, negligence

4. compassion – concern for the suffering of others – lòng trắc ẩn

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Values such as honesty, diligence, and compassion are still important.

   • Synonyms: empathy, kindness, benevolence

   • Antonyms: indifference, cruelty, callousness

5. cutthroat job market – highly competitive employment environment – thị trường việc làm khốc liệt

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: These behaviours can benefit young people as they enter today’s cutthroat job market.

   • Synonyms: competitive job market, fierce employment arena, high-stakes labor market

   • Antonyms: stable job market, relaxed employment field, low-pressure labor market

6. moral compass – internal guide for what is right and wrong – kim chỉ nam đạo đức

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Adherence to traditional principles enables youth to form a moral compass.

   • Synonyms: ethical guide, conscience, moral integrity

   • Antonyms: immorality, corruption, amorality

7. hedonistic lifestyles – seeking pleasure as the highest goal – lối sống hưởng lạc

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The youth could fall prey to hedonistic lifestyles.

   • Synonyms: self-indulgent life, pleasure-seeking behavior, luxurious living

   • Antonyms: austere lifestyle, disciplined life, modest living

8. filial piety – respect and care for one’s parents – lòng hiếu thảo

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In Asian societies, filial piety continues to shape moral behavior.

   • Synonyms: family devotion, parental respect, dutifulness

   • Antonyms: disobedience, neglect, rebellion

9. social cohesion – unity and cooperation within a society – sự gắn kết xã hội

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: These values preserve social cohesion even in modern times.

   • Synonyms: social unity, solidarity, community harmony

   • Antonyms: social division, fragmentation, disunity

10. pivotal role – extremely important or influential role – vai trò then chốt

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Traditional values continue to play a pivotal role in modern life.

    • Synonyms: crucial role, central role, vital part

    • Antonyms: minor role, trivial role, insignificant part

⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures & Explanation (with Vietnamese Translation)

1. “There has been an ongoing debate over whether…”
   → Cấu trúc "there has been" + noun + over whether" để nêu chủ đề đang được bàn cãi.
   🟢 Dịch: Có một cuộc tranh luận kéo dài về việc liệu rằng...

2. “I totally disagree with the view that such ideas are outdated.”
   → Sử dụng “the view that + clause” để diễn đạt quan điểm rõ ràng và trang trọng.
   🟢 Dịch: Tôi hoàn toàn không đồng ý với quan điểm cho rằng những ý tưởng này đã lỗi thời.

3. “These behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s cutthroat job market.”
   → Dạng as + clause chỉ thời điểm hoặc tình huống.
   🟢 Dịch: Những hành vi này chắc chắn có thể mang lại lợi ích cho người trẻ khi họ bước vào thị trường việc làm đầy cạnh tranh ngày nay.

4. “Tradition acts as an anchor of stability in a world where ethical values are often blurred.”
   → Dạng where + clause mô tả tình huống cụ thể; ẩn dụ “anchor of stability” (hình ảnh văn học nâng điểm từ vựng).
   🟢 Dịch: Truyền thống đóng vai trò là điểm tựa ổn định trong một thế giới nơi mà các giá trị đạo đức thường bị lu mờ.

5. “Without such customs to guide their conduct, the youth could easily fall prey to superficial lifestyles.”
   → Cấu trúc điều kiện loại 2 giả định: without + noun, subject + could + V.
   🟢 Dịch: Nếu không có những phong tục như vậy để định hướng hành vi, giới trẻ có thể dễ dàng sa vào lối sống phù phiếm.

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