Phân tích "More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: Overreliance on cars as a major means of transportation can cause several problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh 
      • Main idea 1: As more and more people use private cars, traffic congestion on roads and highways can increase, leading to longer commute times, increased stress, and reduced productivity.
        • Supporting idea:  
          • As a result, people may have to leave home earlier or stay at work later to avoid rush hour traffic, leading to less time spent with family or pursuing other activities.
          • Traffic congestion can cause delays in the transportation of goods and services, leading to economic costs such as lost productivity and higher transportation costs. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Cars are a major source of air pollution, emitting harmful pollutants such as carbon monoxide, nitrogen oxides, and particulate matter, which can have negative health impacts on people and the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH DÙNG "HARM / HARMFUL" TIẾNG ANH
        • Supporting idea: Exposure to high levels of air pollution can increase the risk of respiratory problems such as asthma and lung cancer, as well as cardiovascular disease and stroke. 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: One possible solution to the problem of overreliance on cars is to promote alternative modes of transportation, such as public transit, cycling, and walking. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This can be achieved by investing in public transportation infrastructure, such as buses, trains, and bike lanes, and providing incentives for people to use these modes of transportation, such as reduced fares, improved accessibility, and increased safety measures. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng SUCH AS trong tiếng anh
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Additionally, policies such as congestion pricing or road user charges could be implemented to discourage the use of private cars and encourage more sustainable modes of transportation.
        • Supporting idea: By implementing these policies, the cost of driving a private car is increased, which can encourage people to use more sustainable transportation options such as public transit, cycling, or walking.
        • Example: For example, in Stockholm, Sweden, congestion pricing was implemented in 2006, which led to a 20% reduction in traffic congestion and a significant increase in the use of public transit.

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