Phân tích "Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: One of the main reasons for banning smoking in public places is the health risks associated with passive smoking. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "reason" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Second-hand smoke is known to cause serious health problems such as lung cancer, heart disease, and respiratory illnesses. 
        • Children, pregnant women, and people with underlying health conditions are particularly vulnerable to the harmful effects of passive smoking.
      • Example: If someone nearby is smoking, a non-smoker is forced to inhale secondhand smoke, which can contain over 7,000 chemicals, including 70 known to cause cancer. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Apart from health concerns, smoking in public places also has a negative impact on the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Cigarette smoke releases harmful chemicals such as carbon monoxide, benzene, and formaldehyde, which pollute the air and contribute to climate change. 
        • Banning smoking in public places would not only protect people's health but also reduce the environmental impact of smoking.
      • Example: When cigarette butts are littered in public places, they can be washed into storm drains, rivers, and oceans, causing pollution and harm to wildlife.

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