Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Some people define their success in life as being able to move to higher management positions (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a large section of society likes to remain engaged in work because through this activity they get a sense of accomplishment)
- Supporting idea:
- Many working professionals value their work, and thus being able to climb up the career ladder is considered a major achievement for them.
- Being social creatures, human beings want to excel in their lives, and they want society to know about their success. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
- Once they get initial success, they start liking their work and find it difficult to leave it.
- Example: For example, during the lockdown due to Covid Pandemic, many people have gone into depression by sitting idle at home. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for example"
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Some people define their success in life as being able to move to higher management positions (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a large section of society likes to remain engaged in work because through this activity they get a sense of accomplishment)
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Work provides us with much-needed fun and entertainment (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The regular participation in work breaks the monotony in life and make us feel happy)
- Supporting idea: the time we put at work passes quickly, and this make us feel happy by keeping our worries at bay. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng trạng từ "quickly" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea: Work provides us with much-needed fun and entertainment (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The regular participation in work breaks the monotony in life and make us feel happy)
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể tham khảo các ý sau cùng IELTS TUTOR:
- Main idea 1: People do not want to be tied to their careers because they value their personal time or family time >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "value" tiếng anh
- Example: For example, most women would gladly give up their careers in order to spend quality time with their children. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They would rather sacrifice their big pay check rather than miss out the important milestones of their children)
- Main idea 2: it is not their passion because they would rather pursue their passions such as music, arts and so on >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PARAPHRASE "AND SO ON" (Diễn đạt "vân vân..." tiếng anh)
- Main idea 1: People do not want to be tied to their careers because they value their personal time or family time >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "value" tiếng anh
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