Phân tích "In some countries, many people choose to educate their children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, many people choose to educate their children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In some countries, many people choose to educate their children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: their youngsters can not meet other people, so they will lack of socail skill and might feel shine during conversatins with other if work in a company or integrate into a novel intelligent environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ LACK trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: they can only interact with their family like their parents, grandparents and brothers and sisters if they have some to play with.
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: homeschooled children can not go to university, which will detrimental make them unhappy and can not have a bright future (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: homeschooling children have not many chances to studying in a college program)
      • Supporting idea: They will difficulty applying for university since they cannot take certificates that been awarded by their family. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "since" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: parents grow closer with children, and parents can spend hour with their children when teaching them so they can be kind with them, confirming the relationship between them.
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: It allows both parents and children to choose the times of their classes flexibly.
        • Supporting idea: When, for instance, parents are not able to conduct lessons during the day, they may decide to teach their child early in the morning or in the evening after returning from their work. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "conduct" tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: their youngsters can not meet other people, so they will lack of social skill and might feel shine during conversations with other if work in a company or integrate into a novel intelligent environment. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "company" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: they can only interact with their family like their parents, grandparents and brothers and sisters if they have some to play with.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: homeschooled children can not go to university, which will detrimental make them unhappy and can not have a bright future.
        • Supporting idea: They will difficulty applying for university since they cannot take certificates that been awarded by their family.
        • Example: 

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