Phân tích"People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho là nên tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt (People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems) thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt để solve the world’s environmental problems 
    • Main idea 1: By doing so, governments may discourage citizens from using personal vehicles >> reduce fuel consumption >> make the environment clearer  (directly discourage the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity of public transports)
    • Supporting idea 1: The exorbitant fuel prices may gear them towards cheaper and more eco-friendly modes of transports like walking, cycling or mass transit   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Từ vựng topic Transportation IELTS  
    • Example 1: If fuel prices in a city like Los Angeles, known for its car culture, were to significantly rise, residents might opt for alternatives such as walking, cycling, or increased use of public transportation for everyday errands, potentially leading to a notable decrease in air pollution from car emissions and improving overall air quality in the city.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao tăng giá nhiên liệu là cách tốt để solve the world’s environmental problems 
    • Main idea 2: force citizens to lead greener life 
    • Supporting idea 2: have greater sense of saving energy in household activities such as air conditioning, heating, cooking and so on as well as in manufacturing operations by applying more environmentally friendly technology >>less emission released into the air >> impede the process of air pollution and global warming.
    • Example 2: China's recent crackdown on air pollution, marked by stringent regulations on factories, relocation or adoption of cleaner technologies, alongside public awareness campaigns promoting energy conservation, has led to a marked decline in harmful emissions, effectively mitigating air pollution and curbing the pace of climate change in major cities like Beijing.

• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về ý số 1”People think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems”
      • Main idea 1: By doing so, governments may discourage citizens from using personal vehicles >> reduce fuel consumption >> make the environment clearer  (directly discourage the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity of public transports)
        • Supporting idea: The exorbitant fuel prices may gear them towards cheaper and more eco-friendly modes of transports like walking, cycling or mass transit  
        • Example: If fuel prices in a city like Los Angeles, known for its car culture, were to significantly rise, residents might opt for alternatives such as walking, cycling, or increased use of public transportation for everyday errands, potentially leading to a notable decrease in air pollution from car emissions and improving overall air quality in the city.
      • Main idea 2: force citizens to lead greener life 
        • Supporting idea 2: have greater sense of saving energy in household activities such as air conditioning, heating, cooking and so on as well as in manufacturing operations by applying more environmentally friendly technology >>less emission released into the air >> impede the process of air pollution and global warming.
        • Example 2: China's recent crackdown on air pollution, marked by stringent regulations on factories, relocation or adoption of cleaner technologies, alongside public awareness campaigns promoting energy conservation, has led to a marked decline in harmful emissions, effectively mitigating air pollution and curbing the pace of climate change in major cities like Beijing
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về ý”Education acts as the priority solution”
      • Main idea 1: By prioritizing education on environmental issues, sustainable practices, and alternative transportation options, governments can empower individuals to make informed choices that benefit both the environment and their well-being. 
        • Supporting idea: Education can foster a culture of environmental consciousness, encouraging people to adopt eco-friendly habits and advocate for policies that promote sustainability.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: Furthermore, education can drive innovation and technological advancements in renewable energy and transportation sectors. 
        • Supporting idea: By investing in research and development and supporting educational programs in STEM fields, governments can accelerate the transition towards cleaner energy sources and more sustainable transportation solutions.
        • Example: The case of California exemplifies how investment in renewable energy research and STEM education programs fostered a generation of passionate engineers and scientists who spearheaded advancements in solar panel technology, positioning the state as a leader in solar power generation, showcasing how education and research can drive innovation in the renewable energy sector.

In the quest for environmental sustainability, governments face a pivotal choice between implementing punitive measures, such as escalating fuel taxes, and prioritizing environmental education. In my opinion, increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles can be a viable strategy to address environmental issues, but it should not be the sole solution.

On the one hand, it is true that elevating fuel prices constitutes a potent tool in curbing environmental degradation. By disincentivizing personal vehicle usage, governments can effectively reduce fuel consumption, thereby ameliorating air pollution and fostering a clearer environment. For instance, in bustling metropolises like Los Angeles, notorious for vehicular congestion, a substantial rise in fuel prices could prompt residents to embrace alternative modes of transportation, such as walking, cycling, or public transit. Consequently, this shift away from reliance on private vehicles would yield a discernible decline in harmful emissions, augmenting overall air quality.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, it cannot be denied that prioritizing environmental education holds the key to sustainable ecological stewardship. By equipping individuals with knowledge on environmental issues, sustainable practices, and alternative transportation options, governments empower them to make informed choices conducive to environmental preservation. In fact, education fosters a culture of environmental consciousness, prompting individuals to adopt eco-friendly habits and advocate for policies that prioritize sustainability. This paradigm shift is exemplified by initiatives in California, where investments in renewable energy research and STEM education have precipitated groundbreaking advancements in solar technology, positioning the state as a vanguard in sustainable energy solutions.

In conclusion, I believe that while escalating fuel costs can induce behavioral shifts and mitigate emissions in the short term, the enduring solution lies in cultivating a populace equipped with the knowledge and tools to effect systemic change.

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