Phân tích "Some people state that schools should have a social responsibility to encourage children not to eat junk food. Others believe that parents should take responsibility for their children's eating habits. Discuss both views and state your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/3/2024 )

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people state that schools should have a social responsibility to encourage children not to eat junk food. Others believe that parents should take responsibility for their children's eating habits. Discuss both views and state your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/3/2024 )

Some people state that schools should have a social responsibility to encourage children not to eat junk food. Others believe that parents should take responsibility for their children's eating habits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people state that schools should have a social responsibility to encourage children not to eat junk food.
    • Main idea 1: Shools should promote healthy eating habits as part of their broader mission to foster students' well-being. 
      • Supporting idea: Providing nutritious meals in school cafeterias, offering education about nutrition and healthy eating, and restricting access to junk food on campus are seen as ways schools can contribute to improving children's diets.
      • Example: Through initiatives like the Farm to School program, schools can promote healthy eating habits by providing nutritious meals sourced locally, offering education about nutrition, and restricting access to junk food on campus, fostering students' well-being.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Moreover, since children spend a significant portion of their day at school, educators have ample opportunity to influence their dietary choices positively.
      • Supporting idea: They can model healthy eating behaviors, provide education about nutrition, and create environments that support healthy food choices, thereby impacting students' overall well-being.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that parents should take responsibility for their children's eating habits. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Ultimately, parents are the primary caregivers and decision-makers in their children's lives. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They believe that it is the parents' duty to instill healthy eating habits in their children from an early age. 
        • Parents have more control over what their children eat at home and can set a good example by modeling healthy behaviors themselves. 
    • Main idea 2: It is unfair to burden schools with the responsibility of managing every aspect of children's lives, especially when it comes to something as personal as diet.
      • Supporting idea: Schools have limited resources and expertise in managing dietary choices compared to parents who can tailor meals according to individual needs and preferences. 
      • Example: Enforcing a uniform, school-managed diet within a diverse student population with varying dietary needs, preferences, and cultural backgrounds would be a logistical challenge, given teachers' limited resources and expertise, thus emphasizing that the responsibility for a child's diet is better suited for parents who can cater to individual needs more effectively.

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