Phân tích "If people who go to live in other countries, they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 25/6/2022 & 31/3/2024)

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If people who go to live in other countries, they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: the refusal to adapt to host environment would create a cultural barrier for immigrants.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Newcomers will certainly face difficulties if they do not conform to the norms of social behaviour in the host country)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It will become almost impossible for them to blend into their new environment. 
        • This leads to social isolation, which has negative influences on people’s lives. 
        • If immigrants behave in accordance with the local norms, they will be accepted easily by local inhabitants, and as a result, they can receive/gain respects and affections as well as some help from the local. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: local people will be more welcoming when they feel that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life HOẶC: The establishment of closer links with the host community might lead to greater integration and mutual understanding) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "understanding" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, when the enterprises want to expand their production in a new country, they must be aware of business practices there, which provides them with useful information to maximise profits. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: For example, an entrepreneur who comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the business practices of that country) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "useful / useless" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: it is logical/true that limited knowledge of local customs may result in some illegal actions in the host country and make local/native people unpleased. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, in Singapore, one of the cleanest countries in Asia, local residents consider anyone dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in the public. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: In Singapore, for instance, residents will consider newcomers dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In the modern era, science and technology play an essential role in shaping human civilization. However, art remains indispensable (không thể thiếu – essential, crucial, vital) because it reflects aspects of life that no scientific achievement can fully capture.

Firstly, art provides a profound (sâu sắc – deep, thoughtful, insightful) insight into human emotions, which are often overlooked by purely scientific approaches. While technology can measure brain activity, it cannot explain the aesthetic value (giá trị thẩm mỹ – artistic worth, beauty, artistic significance) of a painting or the emotions aroused by a melody. For example, Van Gogh’s “Starry Night” continues to evoke a sense of melancholy (u sầu – sadness, gloom, sorrow) and hope simultaneously, revealing the complexity of human feelings that equations and algorithms fail to convey. Thus, art helps individuals to connect emotionally and cultivate empathy, something beyond the mechanistic (máy móc – automatic, rigid, robotic) domain of science.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, art serves as a cultural repository (kho tàng văn hóa – archive, treasury, collection) that preserves and communicates the values, struggles, and aspirations of different societies. Scientific inventions may improve material living conditions, but they do not necessarily record the collective memory (ký ức tập thể – shared memory, communal memory, group remembrance) of a nation. For instance, literature from war-torn countries documents suffering and resilience, offering lessons about human dignity and endurance that technology alone cannot provide. This timeless (vĩnh cửu – eternal, enduring, ageless) feature of art ensures that future generations understand the lived experiences of their ancestors, reinforcing identity and belonging.

In conclusion, while science and technology enhance efficiency and comfort, only art can reveal the depth of human emotions and preserve the richness of cultural identity.

New Vocabulary with Explanation

1. Indispensable (không thể thiếu – essential, crucial, vital)

   • Synonyms: essential, necessary, crucial

   • Antonyms: dispensable, unnecessary, trivial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụy: “However, art remains indispensable because it reflects aspects of life...”

2. Profound (sâu sắc – deep, thoughtful, insightful)

   • Synonyms: deep, intense, insightful

   • Antonyms: shallow, superficial, trivial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Art provides a profound insight into human emotions...”

3. Aesthetic value (giá trị thẩm mỹ – artistic worth, beauty, artistic significance)

   • Synonyms: beauty, artistry, artistic significance

   • Antonyms: ugliness, unattractiveness, deformity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...it cannot explain the aesthetic value of a painting...”

4. Melancholy (u sầu – sadness, gloom, sorrow)

   • Synonyms: sadness, sorrow, gloom

   • Antonyms: joy, happiness, cheerfulness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...continues to evoke a sense of melancholy and hope simultaneously...”

5. Mechanistic (máy móc – automatic, rigid, robotic)

   • Synonyms: automatic, rigid, robotic

   • Antonyms: humanistic, flexible, organic

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...beyond the mechanistic domain of science.”

6. Cultural repository (kho tàng văn hóa – archive, treasury, collection)

   • Synonyms: archive, treasury, collection

   • Antonyms: emptiness, void, absence

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Art serves as a cultural repository...”

7. Collective memory (ký ức tập thể – shared memory, communal memory, group remembrance)

   • Synonyms: shared memory, communal memory, group remembrance

   • Antonyms: forgetfulness, amnesia, oblivion

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...record the collective memory of a nation.”

8. Timeless (vĩnh cửu – eternal, enduring, ageless)

   • Synonyms: eternal, enduring, ageless

   • Antonyms: temporary, fleeting, momentary

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “This timeless feature of art ensures that future generations...”

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Contrast clause:

   • “While technology can measure brain activity, it cannot explain the aesthetic value of a painting...”

   • Vietnamese: “Trong khi công nghệ có thể đo hoạt động não, nó không thể giải thích giá trị thẩm mỹ của một bức tranh...”

2. Relative clause with abstract noun:

   • “...revealing the complexity of human feelings that equations and algorithms fail to convey.”

   • Vietnamese: “...tiết lộ sự phức tạp của cảm xúc con người mà các phương trình và thuật toán không thể truyền đạt.”

3. Noun clause as subject:

   • “What art provides is an emotional connection beyond science.” (rephrased form from ideas in essay)

   • Vietnamese: “Những gì nghệ thuật mang lại là một sự kết nối cảm xúc vượt ra ngoài khoa học.”

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