Phân tích"Some people say that every human being can create art (e.g. painting), others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/8/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people say that every human being can create art (e.g. painting), others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 26/8/2023)

Some people say that every human being can create art (e.g. painting), others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think only the people born with the ability can create art 
    • Main idea 1: These individuals have an inherent sense of creativity, aesthetics, and an intuitive understanding of visual elements that set them apart.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Some artists may exhibit signs of creativity and artistic talent from a very young age. 
        • They might display a natural inclination toward drawing, painting, or other artistic pursuits, which can be seen as early indicators of their abilities.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Example: Fashion designers are creative individuals with a keen eye for aesthetics and an understanding of how to use visual elements to create beautiful and stylish clothing, translating inspiration from the world around them into unique and wearable designs
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm every human being can create art (e.g. painting), & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Artistic skills, including painting, can be cultivated and developed over time.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Art is not limited to a select group of people; instead, it is a craft that can be learned and refined through practice, education, and dedication. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • With the right guidance and effort, anyone can become proficient at creating art.
      • Example: Pianist and painter Vienna Teng is a great example of someone who has cultivated and developed her artistic skills over time, starting to play the piano at the age of four, beginning to paint in her teens, studying music and art in college, and eventually enjoying a successful career as both a musician and painter.
    • Main idea 2: Throughout history and across cultures, artists have emerged from diverse backgrounds, and many have not exhibited early signs of innate talent. 
      • Supporting idea: These artists have made significant contributions to the world of art, challenging the notion that innate ability is a prerequisite.
      • Example: Van Gogh, a Dutch Post-Impressionist painter known for his bold colors and expressive brushstrokes, grappled with mental illness throughout his life and did not sell any of his paintings during his lifetime, yet his work is now among the most famous and beloved in the world

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In the modern era of rapid scientific and technological advancement, art continues to play a central role in human civilization. While some believe that only individuals born with innate (bẩm sinh – natural, inborn, inherent) talent can create meaningful works of art, others argue that artistic skills can be nurtured through education and practice.

On the one hand, proponents of the first view assert that certain people are naturally endowed with an inherent (có sẵn – intrinsic, congenital, instinctive) sense of creativity and aesthetics. These individuals often show a natural inclination (khuynh hướng tự nhiên – tendency, predisposition, propensity) toward artistic expression from an early age, such as effortlessly sketching or composing music. Fashion designers, for example, are frequently praised for their keen eye (con mắt tinh tế – sharp vision, perceptiveness, discernment) for color and form, enabling them to transform inspiration from daily life into distinctive designs. This suggests that for some, artistry is less a skill to be acquired than a gift to be revealed.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, I firmly support the belief that art is a skill accessible to everyone, as it can be cultivated (trau dồi – fostered, honed, developed) and refined over time. Unlike the deterministic view, this perspective highlights that art is not reserved for a privileged few but is instead a learnable craft (nghề có thể học được – trainable skill, teachable trade, practicable work). With persistent effort, guidance, and formal education, ordinary individuals can become proficient artists. The pianist and painter Vienna Teng exemplifies this path, having gradually expanded her artistry through years of dedication. Moreover, history is replete with artists from diverse social and cultural backgrounds who did not exhibit early signs of brilliance. Van Gogh, for instance, struggled with personal hardships and sold none of his works during his lifetime, yet his bold brushstrokes are now celebrated worldwide, demonstrating that artistic mastery (sự thành thạo nghệ thuật – expertise, virtuosity, craftsmanship) need not stem from predetermined (được định sẵn – preordained, inevitable, fated) ability.

In conclusion, although some individuals may display extraordinary talent from birth, art ultimately transcends biology, proving that anyone with perseverance and passion can create works of lasting value.

🔑 New Vocabulary with Explanation & Synonyms/Antonyms

1. innate (bẩm sinh)

   • Synonyms: natural, inborn, inherent

   • Antonyms: acquired, learned, artificial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: only individuals born with innate talent can create meaningful works of art

2. inherent (có sẵn, vốn có)

   • Synonyms: intrinsic, congenital, instinctive

   • Antonyms: extrinsic, acquired, external

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: an inherent sense of creativity and aesthetics

3. natural inclination (khuynh hướng tự nhiên)

   • Synonyms: tendency, predisposition, propensity

   • Antonyms: aversion, reluctance, disinclination

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a natural inclination toward artistic expression from an early age

4. keen eye (con mắt tinh tế)

   • Synonyms: sharp vision, perceptiveness, discernment

   • Antonyms: carelessness, indifference, insensitivity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: fashion designers have a keen eye for color and form

5. cultivated (trau dồi, phát triển dần)

   • Synonyms: fostered, honed, developed

   • Antonyms: neglected, ignored, undeveloped

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: art is a skill that can be cultivated and refined over time

6. learnable craft (nghề có thể học được)

   • Synonyms: trainable skill, teachable trade, practicable work

   • Antonyms: innate gift, inborn talent, natural aptitude

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: art is not reserved for a privileged few but is a learnable craft

7. artistic mastery (sự thành thạo nghệ thuật)

   • Synonyms: expertise, virtuosity, craftsmanship

   • Antonyms: amateurism, incompetence, ineptitude

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: demonstrating that artistic mastery need not stem from predetermined ability

8. predetermined (được định sẵn, an bài trước)

   • Synonyms: preordained, inevitable, fated

   • Antonyms: unplanned, uncertain, accidental

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: artistic mastery need not stem from predetermined ability

🔑 Difficult Grammar Structures with Vietnamese Translation

1. Concessive clause (Although + clause)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Although some individuals may display extraordinary talent from birth, art ultimately transcends biology.

   • Dịch: Mặc dù một số người có thể thể hiện tài năng bẩm sinh từ khi sinh ra, nghệ thuật cuối cùng vẫn vượt lên trên yếu tố sinh học.

2. Relative clause with reduced form

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: history is replete with artists from diverse social and cultural backgrounds who did not exhibit early signs of brilliance

   • Dịch: Lịch sử tràn ngập những nghệ sĩ đến từ nhiều hoàn cảnh xã hội và văn hóa khác nhau, những người không thể hiện tài năng bẩm sinh từ sớm.

3. Cleft sentence (emphasis)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It is through persistent effort, guidance, and formal education that ordinary individuals can become proficient artists.

   • Dịch: Chính nhờ nỗ lực bền bỉ, sự hướng dẫn và giáo dục chính quy mà những cá nhân bình thường có thể trở thành nghệ sĩ thành thạo.

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