Phân tích"As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa)

Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: While adults become well aware of happenings around them and try to tackle every problem in hope of a satisfied life, children often suffer from anything without recognition  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "aware" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: children’s knowledge about the competitive world is limited, they seem to be kinder and hardly lie to their peers, whereas adults become more self-fish and evil
      • Supporting idea: Children, despite being less aware of adults’ life, show their true emotion and never can stress annoy them like the way this comes to adults.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"reveal"tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: These changes prove to be essential and conducive to individual life for many reasons
    • Main idea 1: As a result of experiencing years of study and work, people grow mature and learn some tricks so that they can deal with difficulties which happen unexpectedly. 
      • Supporting idea: This helps to ease their life and make their social relationship stable.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "oblivious" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: As time passes by, they must learn how to choose what they would say, rather than everything that comes up to their mind in seconds.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: In Vietnam, there is a saying, “bending the tongue 7 times before saying”, which indicates the importance of thinking carefully of what to say.
• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ideas khác:
  • Main idea: A baby expresses directly how he or she feels through a variety of ways such as facial expression or body language 
  • For example: 
    • If they hate some food, they will never open their mouth. However, as they grow up, they learn how to fake the feelings for specific reasons.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng dấu phẩy tiếng anh 
    • They pleasedly eat the food which they probably hate so badly just because they want to make other people comfortable.

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